National Destiny's Chef: Playing Pig Hero, with Hinata as My Teammate

Well, I basically skimmed through this book. Many novels about the fate of the nation these days share a common problem that I personally dislike: they all start hurling insults as soon as they go live. I think it's okay to question things and even use a little bit of insults, but there's no need for it to be all insults!

Keep it up, DaDa! 💪

Author, please don't write "123" when you're writing. It's really annoying. You could have finished writing it in one go, but you had to write several pages instead.

No way! First of all, the title. It mentions Hinata, but actually it includes not only Hinata, but also Bald Qiang and Luffy. If it were just Hinata, I wouldn't say anything, but the author clearly doesn't understand Hinata's mechanics. She's supposed to be a quiet, gentle young lady, and you turned her into Lu Zhishen (a character from Journey to the West known for his eccentricities).

Honestly, this novel is pretty addictive. First of all, all the characters are out of character (OOC). Luffy's OOC is relatively minor, since there's not much for him to be OOC about. The other characters are all OOC, but it's not really OOC in a strict sense, because the author is just playing with words, simply using his own characters—in other words, riding the coattails of popular figures.

It's too padded, especially the part about the transformation into the Stone Armored Bear. You divided it into beginning, upper, middle, lower, end, and tail, but the Stone Armored Bear only appears in the tail and tail chapters. The other four chapters are about irrelevant things and don't match the title. It's hard to read and makes people feel like you're just padding the numbers. Regardless of what others think, I feel very uncomfortable.

Get to the main plot! I've read six chapters and spent five of them just posting comments. Author, is the beginning this weak? The main plot isn't even there. Ninety percent of readers leave before even seeing chapter six. No wonder it's not popular. If the beginning is this weak, what's the point of writing a book?

I think it's too weak, it's almost drowning me. I don't like it. Is your Hinata from Road to Ninja? If not, it's too trash and I don't recommend it. You could train your poison resistance.

Not bad (*๓´╰╯`๓)♡

I couldn't even bear to look at the third one. The main character, Piggy Hero, was bearable, but his teammates were Japanese! What was going on? And they were even representing my country in the war, with two Japanese teammates, one of whom I didn't even recognize.