Reborn: The Howling Moon Wolf Emperor's Journey Begins with the Spiritual Qi Revival

Come on, the author, please update more. You see, the donkeys who only produce two shifts a day don't dare to do this. Look, next door, they produce four and five shifts every day.

It's quite good among alien beast novels. Although the author is a newcomer and may not be particularly good at controlling the rhythm and plot in the early stage, the author also realizes that some of the previous plots are a bit delayed. However, it has been written and it is really difficult to change it now. When everyone reads it, I hope it can be tolerant. The subsequent writing of this book is indeed getting better and better. When reading, if you feel that the writing is not particularly good, a bit wordy, or has some toxic points, please be a little more tolerant to new authors. After all, this is free. I have communicated with the author. The author has a very good personality and listens to opinions. Some problems that occurred in the early writing are also being corrected. This book will get better and better. Forget it, in fact, I thought this book was a piece of shit from the beginning, and then I had some communication with the author yesterday, and I felt that the author also realized that his shortcomings were being corrected, so I helped the author clean up the book in the review area. But then I looked at the latest pictures and found that they were still in the water and not much had changed at all. The main reason was that the language was not very refined and there were some unnecessary nonsense. For example, in the latest pictures, there is a scene of a silly robe eating flowers. Is it to make the book lively and interesting? A silly roe deer pushes a flower in its hand and eats it, and then the protagonist lies there and watches it for a long time. Does it make sense for you to make this thing except for the word count of water? Want to make the protagonist appear innocent and cute? Is the plot lively and interesting? Then there are a lot of meaningless psychological descriptions. If you compare it to junior high school and high school essays, maybe 400 of the 800 words are nonsense. A battle can be described in one mental reaction, and the tension before a battle can be described in one description. There are even ten pictures of a relic that has nothing to do with the protagonist. Whether this relic is dead or alive has no impact on the protagonist at all. He just jumped out and attacked the protagonist in the early stage, but failed. You could kill him directly, or you could arrange for him to come out and attack the protagonist later, but the author just spent ten pictures describing this relic, attacking a wild boar, and being attacked by a cheetah.

[Stare][Stare] Affirmation from oneself

Author, you must not be a eunuch. Don't look at the fact that there are only two or three thousand people reading now. That's because you wrote relatively little, only 80,000 people. If you wrote hundreds of thousands, there should be more people, so persistence is victory. You don't want to be a eunuch.

The writing is quite nice, but the inheritance is a bit long. The author said it was too short, and my sister-in-law will definitely be in a lot of pain later.

After reading it, I found that the setting and general plot are the type I like. The writing style is above average, which is enough for a web article. The logic is more rigorous than other books of the same type. There are no forgotten settings or obvious bugs in the plot. It can be seen that the author at least understood the basic habits of wolves during the creation, and the image he created is very close to nature. , There is a certain degree of literary vividness, but it is best not to have too big fluctuations in the style of writing. The text in some chapters is very elegant, but sometimes the sudden appearance of "meme" type words ruins the atmosphere. It is understandable that the author wants to create a sense of humor or achieve a specific effect. Personally, I think moderate use has a good effect, but it is better to consider it carefully. In addition, in terms of plot, the psychological descriptions of literary masterpieces are very detailed, but they are obviously not suitable for online articles where readers are looking for relaxation and pleasure. Literary novels still have some detailed settings. The plots in this book are almost all created with excessive details, which will make people feel boring and monotonous. The setting and storytelling of this type of novel are obviously more important. I think the author's focus should be on the logic and interest of the story. After all, feedback from the first-tier readers of a new book is very important. Slightly speeding up the pace of the story may have a good effect. Although code words are important, the text should not be too casual (it does not mean that current writing is not good). After all, the soul of an interesting novel is carried by words. I hope the author will get better and better results (the key is that I want to read it haha) Come on hehehe (ºº ) Also remember to interact with readers (I don't know what others think, but I feel like authors who respect their readers really love it)

I'll give it five stars. I feel pretty good about it, but some parts are too detailed and the plot shouldn't be too drawn out. I still prefer cool writing [face covering], but I still encourage the author.

There are very few books on this subject, so give me five stars to encourage you. I just hope there won't be a human heroine in the future. After all, wolves are wolves, what the hell are wolves and humans?

So far, there are no poisonous points. The author said that there are no human beings in this book, only animals fighting for supremacy. The setting is good, and there is no need to deal with human problems. Good book recommendation, author, cheers [sending heartfelt wishes] [top post]

It started very well. Although the style seems to have changed a bit after the spiritual energy was revived, it is generally good. If you can keep it up, I recommend reading it. The update speed is much faster than the previous books I read.