The Red Dragon of Hogwarts

First Other novels: only a few hundred pieces are enough for the first grade This novel: one page, the third grade passed

After reading ten chapters and making a brief comment, the setting is quite novel among the HP novels I have read so far. The author's writing style is still good, but the author has an element of Black Lion, Black Zhan, and Black Xiaotian in it. The first is OOC. Sirius hates his always pure family. He hates the arrogant and noble style of pure blood from the bottom of his heart. He doesn't like Slytherin's self-restraint and aloofness. At the same time, he will never call someone "Mudblood", a term that pure blood despises other people. Moreover, at that time, the Potter family, like the Weasley family, were all Muggle-leaning and were despised in the pure-blood circle, and James would not behave in a pure-blood manner. The author wants to create the feeling that these two people have a conflict with the heroine and can be written as vengeful boys. This kind of conflict is even quite cute, at least it will not be so frustrating and a bit boring. There is no difference at all if the previous plot between Xiaotian and James is replaced by an extreme pure-blood believer. In the end, I can only say that the author's writing style is online and OOC is available. I will give it three stars as appropriate and hope that the author will continue to work hard.

It's good, but I always feel like it's a bit of a running list, emmm. The other thing is the emotional line. Isn't it nice to have more feelings? [Crying] In addition, of course adults want them all! If there is no emotional line, it always feels like something is missing.

It's great. I don't think there's a need for emotional dramas. If you want to watch emotional dramas, just go find them. On the contrary, there are very few cpHP novels nowadays. Also, the heroine is really too weak. I have never seen her strong side. Can you strengthen the heroine?

This novel is still great, but who is the male protagonist? I personally prefer emotional scenes. Is the heroine's strength described too weak? She is still a giant dragon after all.

I really didn't like the early years when the protagonist was being picked on, so why didn't you tell the teacher? Why is the retaliation against them so light? I really can't understand how she could endure it for such a long time. Alas, I really do. I think the protagonist is just giving selflessly, and she has gained almost nothing.

I feel that the protagonist is a bit too weak. She has some abilities like two dragons and other magical powers. As a result, she is now like this. The abilities she displays are a bit weak compared to the abilities she possesses.

Nice! ! ! Don't want a male lead, please.

5-Star review, it is the best Harry Potter fanfic, because the heroine is Bertalon Gralan, the incarnation of the red dragon, starting a new life since it came to another world. I also met Dumbledore, the principal of Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry, Sirius and Harry's parents, etc., And also met members of Voldemort's Death Eater organization, etc...

Is there any mistake? In the dragon world, dragons can be resurrected even if they are beaten to pieces. In the world of Harry Potter, one is afraid of a small curse. Bad review