The Ideal City: I Cheated on Zhuge Dali

Young author, did you drop this 10-chapter extra coupon? Or the extra coupons for these 20 chapters?

It's a pretty good book. The main character is not pretentious, and the writing is very relevant to life. The shorter one looks very comfortable, but the two heroines are a bit greedy, but it's acceptable. After all, Dali and Murphy look the same, and it would be awkward to give up either one. I hope the author will update more, 4000 a day is not enough.

Episode 5 of Season 2 of Broken Things felt like Hu Qiang did not return to the original universe, but traveled to a parallel universe. There are three universes in total, the original universe is where the cat was picked up, the second universe is the universe where the cat is traveled through, and the third universe is where the cat is not picked up.

It's a pretty good book. If I evaluate it objectively, the author writes it very carefully and doesn't copy lines like most fictitious fan fiction. It's imaginative, but it fits the TV series very well. The personalities of each character are exactly the same as in the original work, which is great. It's full of emotional scenes. I like it very much. The only bad thing is that there are too few chapters. There are only two chapters and 4,000 words in one day. The writing style is a bit green, so I think it's a newbie. The author should work hard and hope to continue to do so in the future. The more I watch it, the more I enjoy it. The emotional scenes are written in detail and the writing becomes smoother and smoother. It's really good. But can the author consider Dali again? If it doesn't work in the early stage, it can be added in the later stage. I hope the author can adopt it. I really like Dali very much.

Frankly speaking, the writing is average, but the characters and the way they speak are very consistent with the characters in the play. The original play is written in detail and has its own innovations. In terms of relationships, I see that it should be the dual heroines of Murphy and Dali. I hope that the authors, Murphy and Dali, will not let go. Rose is casual, but the author seems to have said that he is not planning to write Rose. Finally, I hope the author will get better and better as he writes more.

Five-star support, I like it very much. I have just one question, do you want both Murphy and Dali?

I have to say that this is the first time a relationship has been established so early since I have read so many books. The protagonist expresses his love at once, unlike those other books that express his love vaguely.

The previous article is quite good, but Dali was a bit uncomfortable for me to read. Judging from the author's comments, it seems that he is planning to write about some twists and turns of love. I'll save it for now. I'll come back when I confess my feelings. Come on (σ≧∀≦)σ

Come on, keep an eye on you!

Come on come on come on come on