Villain: From the Start, I Made My Ice-Cold Master Blush

Work hard, it's not bad

I just finished reading it. It was okay at first, but it was a little bit poisonous to see the inexplicable yandere licking the Master. If you don't read these, the writing is indeed very good. Later, I got a Taoist companion from the Master's previous life. It felt completely unnecessary. Maybe the author wanted to whitewash the Master. My personal suggestion Ah, if a character is ruined, don't save it, especially if it's a secret character. If the first heroine collapses, then focus on bringing up the second, third, or fourth heroine. After all, there is a high chance that a character who fails to be saved will become a poisonous point. It may also affect the impression left by the protagonist on readers, which is very bad, especially when the book is just starting out like this. If you write according to your own outline, and the character is broken, you will arrange another person who can replace the first heroine to make the character dilute. The author's strengths are his writing style and plot arrangement which are quite good (if you don't count the areas where the writing is a bit broken). In addition, the book has just started and there is no need to make major changes to the outline to affect the subsequent story.

A quick start, the best harem stallion novel, very comfortable to read, the plot is very novel

Let me talk about my own viewing experience. I personally feel that it is very good and it suits my taste. I watched the recording of Goddess Qiong Ming a few days ago and my heart broke. This novel just made me wash my eyes. I hope that the master will not be made into a puppet, so that there will be no viewing experience. It is better to use the master to make her fall step by step, and finally become a fool who will be broken without the protagonist. You can also use her to make the male protagonist heartbroken step by step. Can you think about it, the author? Please [laughs] It's just my personal opinion. If you complain, you're right, but I won't think I'm wrong either [makes a face] emmmm, it was written wrong. It breaks the heart of the son of destiny, not the male protagonist.

It's very well written, you must stick to it.

Wonderful, this is how it tastes! ! !

It looks good. I hope the author will continue to work hard and keep writing. This is not good enough [laughing and crying]

It makes me laugh so hard. This system of yours must be code written by a certain programmer. Grab whatever is missing.

I read a lot of books and found one thing in common. You can never stand up by being a licker. No matter how humiliated and suppressed you are, no matter how much revenge and hatred you talk about, in fact, you have to lick when you should. It is called affectionate. After thinking a little more deeply, many of these books are written by new authors who do not have that rich writing experience. The behavior of the protagonists in their works is probably what they think and think when they put themselves in their shoes. Could it be deduced that these authors themselves have this kind of dog-licking mentality without even knowing it, so the dog-licking in their works is also limited? The key point is that the market for such dog-licking-related books, movies, and TV series is getting bigger and bigger, and it's not easy, hehehe. I didn't give a low score. I read the beginning and skipped through some more. I didn't mean to offend the author, but I just had a whim to think about it and wanted to see what others had to say.

It feels very good, the update frequency is fast, even during the Chinese New Year, two chapters were updated every day, and the driving writing is simple and clear enough, unlike other articles that are like reading comprehension. Although the first few chapters are a bit strange, they are just right, and there are emotional lines. It is not a brainless Teddy novel, and there are not too many poisonous points. I think this book will definitely survive to the end.