
Building a Dynasty with a System and Kobe in His Final Years
带上系统和末期科比一起缔造王朝
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 500k Words
- Genre
- Sports
- Subgenre
- Gaming & Sports
- Updated
- 3y ago
- Source
- Fanqie
Synopsis
235Chapters
3Reads
6.9Score
1Listens
215.5kReads · all time
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Reader comments 48
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I'm giving this a rating for the time being because the Kobe Bryant template is really not well written. You got Kobe's static template and returned a few months ago. His strength is only 30+. The other attributes are basically improved by training and adding points. Because of the improvement brought by Kobe's template, I can only see the height. There is really no other one, so why not go back and change it? Don't write that they are all static templates. Just write that there are only a few talents that you can buy. Otherwise, it is really insulting. How can Kobe's talents be so useless, right? Isn't this a curse?
Thanks for the praise, please open up the harem for me, but don't focus on describing it, just briefly mention it and it's over. The rhythm is pretty good now
All professional stuff has been checked with relevant information to ensure that there are no deviations as much as possible. Of course, if there are any mistakes, you can still point them out, but please check the relevant information before pointing them out. Otherwise, it would be embarrassing if you use the wrong pointer to point me to the correct one [making a face]
As a basketball article, the author's sense of presence is good, and various data analysis is detailed. But the writing is relatively flat, that is to say, there are no highs or lows, and it is too straightforward. So the overall feeling is that even those completely systematic basketball articles should have much better results than this one. Why? There is no sense of substitution. Because most readers are ordinary people in reality, and their lives are uneventful. Therefore, if you ask readers to read textual research and rigorous data analysis novels in their free time, the author will be tired, and so will the readers. It would be better to write everything in a humorous way, with some dirty jokes and celebrities from the entertainment industry thrown in. If you look carefully, those cuckold stories, rebirth stories, villain stories, and fan stories, as long as they add a little color, their scores on Tomato will be passable. Of course, you can't be too direct. For those old tomato lovers, being subtle is enough.
Come on oh come on
Attribute points can be purchased with points, and the protagonist's physical upper limit is completely sufficient. From the understanding of the text, the character template is just something that breaks the upper limit of the body. The author gave a Kobe Bryant template in the early stage, but it had no effect at all. To be honest, if the author wants to write a long-term story, he shouldn't set character templates.
The book is okay, but it didn't feel good at the beginning, and I had no desire to continue reading. Everything was just mediocre. I hope the author can change it. The system arranged by the author is not very powerful and too bland.
What I wrote is good, but after finishing the playoffs, I went to training without rest at all. I should add some daily life and so on. Someone said that the men's basketball team is really a bit weak now, and it will soon catch up with the men's football team.
Hope he doesn't leave the Lakers, will the retired Kobe Bryant join?
Really, I can't bear it anymore. I don't know why. Before I leave, I want to know. Is your template setting just a long one? Why did I read so many chapters and still only see that he just grew taller, and you didn't give any introduction? Sorry, I was confused. Please write slowly, come on.