Wuxia: Breaking Wanwan's Vows from the Start and Inheriting Bodhidharma's Legacy

Come on come on come on come on

The writing is a bit shabby, but it looks pretty good.

Yes, but the writing style needs to be improved

It's nice, but it's a bit short. One chapter a day is not enough [laughs evilly]

Well written! One of the better-written ones is the fighting plot in which the protagonist kills decisively. At the same time, the protagonist's work style is very decisive and capable, and he never hesitates in anything, which is quite enjoyable to watch. Especially for all kinds of enemies, a few or two moves, no nonsense, will eradicate them all~ Suggestion: This is a fusion world. There are many well-known characters in the original work, especially many skills and stunts. The author is too vague about the protagonist's cultivation level, martial arts, etc.

Come on, come on, come on, come on, come on

The second book I read recently made me stronger after I broke the precept. The cool part about this one is the enemy. If you don't kill me in this chapter, you will definitely die in the next chapter. The killing is clean and neat, no sloppiness, no difficulty, an accident happened after a long time, the enemy escaped and repeatedly jumped around, which is disgusting. The level is improved quickly. If the scene is suitable, you can break the precept. The system is awesome.

After reading this chapter, I looked solemn, lowered my head deeply, turned off my phone silently, stood up, opened the refrigerator, and took out a bottle The 1982 Collector's Edition of Lei Bi was held tightly in his hand and he slowly walked to the window. The scenery outside the window is a bit dim, just like my heart Love is the same, heavy, very heavy, gradually, the outside becomes gray It started to rain lightly in the sky. Why, my vision is blurred. No I don't know if it's me crying or it's raining heavily, it could be both Well, my mood is even more melancholy. I can no longer suppress the emotions inside me. Opened the window and shouted out the window Come: It's so short! Who do you look down on?!

It's very well written, I like it very much. Keep up the good work, author✊, I love you [sending my heart]

Invincible cool writing, it's really cool, I'm not feeling aggrieved, I'll kill when I need to, and I'll kill when I need to. There are indeed some minor problems with his combat power. I saw a lot of them, and he immediately scolded Murong Fu, saying that he was only the first innate, while Yun Zhonghe was already in the early stage of Grandmaster. He said that Qiao Feng was not as good as Yun Zhonghe. That was because he had not looked back. Later, he wrote that Qiao Feng was the best Grandmaster and could fight against weaker Grand Masters. From this point of view, the problem is that I look down on Murong Fu too much. Although I also look down on him, at least there should be a middle-stage master or an ordinary late-stage master. Brainless white text. I was a bit speechless when I saw the rest. There were countless times when people who were several levels lower than the male protagonist dared to fight against the male protagonist. It was obvious that the male protagonist had killed people who were much stronger than them, yet they still dared to fight. This kind of common belief was simply outrageous. Moreover, the subsequent dialogue, the speeches of Zhang Sanfeng and the sweeping monk, made me very happy. The whole newbie has no grandmaster style, and the whole gangster fight has no real character at all. He is just an ordinary person with power.