War Against Japan: From the Start, I Was a Japanese Collaborator

Book: Resistance Against Japan, Two Japanese Japs The first ten chapters. Personal feeling: average Outline: Explain the location, background and identity - patrol of the protagonist - Wang Qi brings medicine - Li Er checks - successful concealment - eating at the stall - side words - awakening system - novice gift pack - gathering and search - Wang Qi returns to the village - disbands - eating in the restaurant - - Plan - Wangcun Incident - Notification of Transfer (Political Commissar) - Burying People - Drinking in Hotels - First Kill - Laying Mines and Exploding - Lottery - Supervisor Inquiry - Suspecting Fruit Party - Leaving the County - Chasing the Protagonist - Li Er's Guess - Moving to Zhao Village 1. Core elements Anti-Japanese themes are uncommon. In addition to involving some aspects, it is also more difficult to write. What this kind of article needs and is most important is resonance, and this requires characters and events to trigger readers' feelings of patriotism or respect. The sublimation of an idea and belief will increase the connotation and spirit of the work, so this requires ideological concepts and a historical foundation. If not, it will be difficult for the work to achieve a good result. There is less description of this emotion in the article, which is a bit blunt. It is recommended to accumulate more material on national revolution. 2. Plot events The basic logic is there, and the events also have a general development path, but if you want to go one step further, the hidden lines, foreshadowing, and description techniques of the events must be improved. Dark lines: It is the deep hidden major events and background, such as the entire situation and major developments of the Anti-Japanese War. Foreshadowing: I recommend the crossover method (self-proclaimed), which means different foreshadowings are intertwined. Foreshadowing 1 leads to foreshadowing 2 as plot A progresses. Foreshadowing 1 explodes in plot b. Foreshadowing 2 advances partially. Foreshadowing 1 can also lead to foreshadowing 3. In short, after the climax, readers will find that there are still foreshadowings, which are interlocking and keep readers reading. (However, the foreshadowing must conform to the basic logic of the world view, the background, and the character image) Descriptive techniques: You can work hard on some environmental description, contrast and contrast, echo before and after, blank space in the article, detailed arrangement, development rhythm, etc., To bring about deeper effects. By the way, if you have time, you can try to analyze some classic works yourself, which will benefit you a lot. 3. Character image For the protagonist, you can describe his unique aspects (character, actions, catchphrases, etc.) To deepen your impression. The image of the character can also be reflected from the actions, language, demeanor, appearance, etc. At the same time, it is also good to accumulate some images of famous historical figures and transform them into your own articles. 4. Background settings The description of characters and events must conform to the background logic. For example, the anti-Japanese war should reflect the situation and resistance of the people at the bottom. Also, in the development of the story, the background is constantly reflected and the story progresses step by step, which can better allow readers to gradually deepen into the world described. Summary: Write from the core concepts, description techniques, writing design and other aspects to make the article more in-depth. This is just my personal opinion and is relatively one-sided. You can judge by yourself. Finally, come on.

Come on, author, it's pretty good so far. I hope the protagonist won't be alone in the future.

I hope there won't be any weapons that are beyond this era. Otherwise I will easily get into trouble

It's pretty good, systematic but not brainless. The character designs are also quite good. Come on😊

It feels like watching a magical drama

Very good. Please update the author quickly. The donkeys in the production team don't dare to rest like this. Please update soon.

It feels pretty good, looks very smooth, has no bumps, and doesn't feel awkward. The overall feeling is very good. I look forward to the next article! [Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like]

It seems like a magical drama, but the author should give it a try!

The front is good, but I didn't like it during the showdown, but the front is still good, keep up the good work👍👍👍👏

Come on! Don't go beyond that time period weapon