The Red Star Shines on the East

The concept of the story is okay, but the author's writing is too bad. One is a mess, with hammers and sticks here and there, and I don't even know what they are. The other is that the military characters are not serious. The editor's original intention was to be humorous, but you made them look like horses and monkeys.

Not bad, rich in imagination, beautiful writing, lively and interesting!

I just read a few chapters. My Chinese skills are not good enough and I had a hard time reading. I can see that the author is writing very carefully, laying out his foreshadowing, and putting himself in his shoes to consider the environment and other factors at that time. But I really struggled to read. I feel that the author wants to express a lot of things in the first few chapters. , The resurrection of the ancients, the changes in the fate of modern people, the time-travel of modern people, and an island man, political factors, the limitations of the travel machine, modern agents opening companies to prepare materials and deal with ancient relics, there are many things, but the sudden jumps are interspersed, and it is really difficult to watch

The idea is pretty good, but the writing style makes me dizzy. I don't know what I'm writing. I can see that the relationships between the characters in the back are basically confused. Don't know what you are doing? It's a mess, and I basically have no desire to read any more. Because the development of things is really messy, but it can be seen that the author is writing seriously.

Logic is confusing

Not a bad start

It's a well-written novel that calls out the blood of the nation. The problem is that it's too short. Please use coded words.

Such a serious book... Please support it! I can still look at this without looking at it... How could it be less than thirty minutes? Mainstream authors who support the cause of justice

The timeline is confusing, abandoned

A hammer in the east and a stick in the west! My knowledge is not enough!