Immortality Begins with a Single Tree

It's a very interesting book. When I was reborn, I became a tree! The concept is wonderful and the setting is very novel!

Not bad, the subject matter of the world of ancient martial arts is also very novel, it just depends on how the author connects the two worlds. The connection is more important. If you don't write well, you will be wrong. If you write well, you will have a much wider range of places to write. I have seen the same theme and only one world. After reading it for a long time, it becomes a bit boring [note] Then I hope that the protagonist will not have a harem. If he has a partner, I hope that their previous relationship will be written more delicately. If you don't want a friend, just stay with a stupid person and it's over. The number of pure water words. But this is just my personal preference. Let the author write as he pleases. If you like it, I will continue reading [I understand] The author was still impatient and didn't make the transition well. He didn't make the transition well in the early stage, and it looked more and more chaotic in the later stage.

The front is good. I hope this is about the struggle for hegemony at the beginning of the world, rather than a cool article about the duel advantage of a single tree. You can write about ancient dinosaurs, the first dragon, the first phoenix, etc., Good, keep up the good work.

Finally, there is a book that is not that kind of urban fantasy. This book is about developing tribes. At present, it looks a bit like a real Lord of Ten Thousand Demons. This Lord of Ten Thousand Demons is different from the one you understand. This one is called a group because of preaching. Of course, its strength It's also very strong. I thought the book started with, uh, a girl being chased by wild beasts, and then being rescued by the protagonist, leading her tribe to surrender to her, and then when the girl was about to die, she was given the lifespan enhanced by a leftover girl. Finally, it's not like this! Like this kind of book, seven or eight of the first ten books are like this, and the rest is this book

Come on author, a great book

It's very well written, and it's the best thing to write in Tomato. The ideas are organized and not messy, and you can see that the author put his heart into it. There are foreshadowings, ups and downs, and IQ. Isn't this better than other messy books? I also read some books and expressed my own opinions. The above is interpreted from my (reader's) perspective, and there may be some mistakes. Corrections are welcome. For a long time, cheats (mainly systems) have been authors' favorite tool to cheat the protagonists. At least its appearance will not make the protagonist stronger, but it also exposes the author's lack of writing power. There are many ways for the protagonist to become stronger. A protagonist who just relies on the system to cheat crazily will be very boring to watch too much. If there is some innovation, it will be fine, but if not, it will be very ordinary or even a disaster. A common problem in many novels is that the narrative is straightforward. Basically, what the protagonist said in the last sentence tells you what to do next. But this cannot be said to be the whole story. Good novels will have points that make people keep reading. But in fact, in addition to this main point, you can also lay some foreshadowing and foreshadowing. When these lines continue to extend until they intersect with the points and are connected in series, it will produce a very explosive and amazing feeling. If the author is a Dorgenmon, readers will be very happy. On the contrary, this is not a good thing, it is terrible. In the above points, the author has done a good job. It is better than other Tomato novels. I also hope that the author can do better. The above is interpreted from my (reader's) perspective, and there may be some mistakes. Corrections are welcome.

Come on, author, it's really beautiful [shy]

This book is very readable, you won't get tired of it after reading it, and it's very precise. Although this book is not systematic. But through hard work step by step, it is still interesting to become a national totem. And so far I feel there is no pitfall. Even if it was time travel, the holes would have been filled in at that time. Finally the answer was told to us. But I think the world of God of War is a bit like the world before monsters appeared. Really nice. Start with a tree. The end is a country. In fact, I am not sure whether the ending is a country. However, for now, I have only seen one country. Later, he should rule the entire world. I think this is the best novel I have ever read, really.

Not bad, it's already available in Tomato. The rhythm and writing skills of the newbie are also within the acceptable range. Good luck, author💪

It's quite good. Compared with other Tomato novels of this type, it can be considered as good, so go for the author. Also, the cover and name really made me miss this great book of yours.