From Refugee to Marshal

The eldest sister, the second sister, and the third sister don't want it anymore?

It's not as bad as you said. After reading a few chapters, there are no major pitfalls.

A very nice book! Five stars!

First of all, I would like to give you a five-star review. Why? Because I think it's not easy for authors to read books. Another thing is that you can at least watch it. That's right, I saw about twenty or thirty pictures. When I see this moment, I always feel something is a bit awkward. Because I personally like to see the background of that era very much. It is not for the purpose of fighting war. In other words, it is based on the Anti-Japanese War, which is not obvious. I like watching this kind of stuff. So when I read the novel, I always felt that there was something wrong with it. Maybe we are not professional enough and cannot find the problem, but we always feel that there is something wrong. I hope the author will work hard and work hard!

Give me a five-star encouragement, who didn't write from Xiaobai? Work hard, come on. If the writing is not vicious enough, just write more. I really like this type of theme. . . Come on

It looks great, give it a five-star rating!

In ancient times, it was a good thing to say that the children of gods were children. You see, the Song Dynasty opened the city gates and captured people directly to the grasslands. When you watch the Three Kingdoms, you still have to stand up, but you still have to be a good person. If you don't, you have to have the aura of the protagonist, just like our great magician "Liu Xiu" [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying]

What should I say, it doesn't quite suit my taste. I've read nearly 100,000 words! It's a bit like daily life, the setting is okay, and the main plot is on the right track. The comments are hilarious. Normal level, five-star praise. But some plots are very embarrassing, such as recruiting a younger brother, fighting, and a mysterious group, which is too hasty. As far as the setting itself is concerned, many details are careless and taken for granted. There is no foreshadowing before and after, and it is straightforward. Generally speaking, it is okay to watch it for fun, but for serious people, it will be very uncomfortable to watch. It's better not to take novels seriously. After all, novels are not documentary, so you don't need to deliberately read them with a critical eye.

It's well written, but officers are promoted too quickly, and they definitely lack command of large troops. Only by accumulating war experience in war can one become a general (one general can achieve great results and ten thousand bones will wither).

The writing is okay. Writing is not easy to encourage. I will give you five stars. Keep it up. Come on.