Shocking! My Immortal Master Is a Rogue Teacher Who Makes Moves on Her Disciple

Hehehe, it looks so good. Hehehe, he is the disciple and the master, or he is the master and the disciple. But according to the current situation, the apprentice should be at the bottom [laughter] [laughter]

Yes, the character design is very accurate. This is the character design of the cool fairy. It is well described and has a quiet and elegant atmosphere in the words.

Although I haven't finished reading it yet, I still want to give you a review. The writing of this book is really good, and the details are very good. Well, the article will have a rather depressing feeling, well, but there is no big problem. I really love it, Master, and Bai Qianyu also likes it. I look forward to good development in the future. The protagonist's ability is very weak in the early stage, but it seems that he will become stronger in the later stage, but actually I don't care, because she never cares whether he is strong or not? Bai Qianyu... This book has a single female protagonist, and they are both proud women. Some people later said that they hope to have two female protagonists. I hope the author can have his own theme and not write what he wants to write most in order to cater to the general readership. I will see how you write it. Well, I hope Bai Qianyu can have a good ending. Finally, the author, I am very worried about your mental state. Come on!

It's okay. Although it's not my cup of tea, I can tell it's a very good book. Good luck to the author😄

It's well written, I hope you won't abuse it, and don't interrupt updates. Well, I can't give you anything, so I'd like to support it and give it a good review.

How should I put it, I have read about 10 chapters, which is not much. Generally speaking, the style is relatively light. This style will not have too much traffic, and the heroine is described in the early stage. The male protagonist is not clear-cut, and there are few points of attraction. The only attraction is the unique personality of the heroine. Those who like this type of heroine should continue reading. I personally think that some psychological descriptions of the male protagonist can be added in the early stage to highlight the image of the male protagonist so that the female protagonist will not sing alone. Since I haven't watched it later, I don't know how it is. The early impression is okay. Come on.

Not bad, but to be honest, I feel that it has the atmosphere of "The Cultivation of Fairies" and "The Record of Qiongming Goddess". The overall language style of the article is relatively bland, giving me a knife-like feeling.

It is really a good book, the writing is delicate, the portrayal of emotions is very good, the overall writing style is very cold, the pace of the article is very slow, it is really comfortable to calm down and read slowly, but the data generally makes the ending a bit hasty. I hope the author can adjust his condition and write better in the next book [heartfelt]

Very beautiful, the author is highly accomplished. I personally prefer the responsible harem series. I feel a little uncomfortable choosing a single female protagonist to fit the title of the book. Moreover, every woman in the article is portrayed so well (except Qing Yi Doge). I feel it is a pity not to accept it. Personal opinion The male protagonist could be a little more forceful, and it felt like it could awaken the memory of the scar on his hand. Didn't the female protagonist have a dream about the male protagonist killing him? Maybe the male protagonist wakes up his memory and wants to kill the female protagonist, and then uses all kinds of knives [laughter] This is a good book, but the introduction is too bland and does not make people want to read on. Only after reading it in depth will you know how wonderful it is. I suggest you revise the introduction to make it more attractive.

The description is so good, it is cold and yet has hot emotions, and the characters are well established. I hope the author will work hard!