Azur Lane Shipgirls Come to the Real World

I wrote my own book, so it's not too much to give it a five-star rating [I learned it].

The writing seems to be quite good, and the reason for deducting two stars is as follows: the protagonist has completely become an official member of Donghuang as soon as he comes on, and is completely restricted immediately. Readers who don't like the male protagonist being controlled and used as a tool like me will naturally understand what I mean. Then there is the reason why all the ship girls are concentrated in Donghuang. It would be better to distribute them in their own camps. That's all. I haven't read the rest yet and I have no motivation to continue reading. Life has dreams and each of them is wonderful. Goodbye, everyone

This book is not bad. The biggest drawback is that it is not a time-travel story. You have the game Azur Lane in reality, and you and so many people have played the plot for six years. You all know that the real purpose of the sirens is to constantly stimulate human ship girls, let them develop technological power, and finally find a turning point, and then fight against the foreign enemies of the original ship girl world. The protagonist and others here have no idea about the plot. Even if you change the purpose of the sirens in the book, you don't even change the plot. What is the result?

I don't quite understand why you have to add an original ship girl. Why do you think your original ship girl will be more popular than the ship girl in the game who has been called my wife for six years? Does it make you patriotic?

When sending girls, there are other male commanders, and girls are given out at the beginning, such as Nevada, Noshiro, Atago and so on.

Well, it's pretty good, but it just doesn't feel right. Personally, I feel that the strength of modern ship girls is too high, so the battle is not as important as other ship girls. Emmm, in the early stage, a battle can be described in two sentences at most. The Persian cat attacks the face, the Nanchang missile washes the ground, and then the battle is over. Well, there is no sense of hedging between brothers without strength. Furthermore, I personally feel that the pace of describing the protagonist is too fast, resulting in a very blank and transparent character? Strange feeling. In summary, the battle scenes are not very good, the daily life is warm but not too warm, and the protagonist is a bit transparent on the edge. (Personal feelings, no other bias.)

Good! It is one of the better potentials among the blue fans, go for it!

I feel pretty good at the moment, and the subject matter is also very novel ~ I hope the author won't be fooled, and I wish the author will not be stuck in the future 👍

I finally understand why the author wants to join Modern Ship Girls. I just want to ask, are there any other ways for the author to get traffic? How much effort did it take to allow Nanchang to defeat the Siren? (Just saying, 3 points is because I think the first half is okay)

Awesome! It's really fun to watch, and it's definitely from the commander who watched the fanfic of 9 Days 17 Golden Wedding 4 [I learned it] [I learned it] [I learned it] The author hastened to update it~~~Have you seen how long my time has been? It's not enough to highlight one! ! ! !