One Piece: I Joined the Marines from the Start, and Somehow Became a God!

Qualified cool writing, fast pace, decisive killing There are still some problems with the details, but it's just that the brain-fresh writing is enjoyable enough. However, what should be reasonable should be as reasonable as possible. It is not necessary to completely restore the original character's personality. At least the villain should have more brains, otherwise the conflict plot will be too unreasonable and easy to play out.

It's a good pirate fanfic. It's strong but not overwhelming. Most importantly, I saw it written about the navy again. But can the author check the information? There are many mistakes. For example, the Thunder Fruit is in Bika, not the Golden Land.

It's nice to watch, and very suitable to my taste. It kills decisively but not indiscriminately. It recruits female officers without any ink. There is no plot where the world government deliberately disgusts people. The protagonist and the world government are in vain but they have the initiative. Only two updates per day are too few. It is better to have ten per day. Give me more

It's pretty good. Some minor flaws are acceptable. Is it really good for Luffy or Sabo Ace to be a marine? Their character is not suitable for the navy. As for the Draconians, the three brothers cannot kill the Draconians when they meet. Especially, Sabo ran away from home because he hates nobles.

Very well written, quick updates It feels like mind control is only useful when controlling the Celestial Dragon, and it doesn't seem necessary to use it on others. Considering the protagonist's strength, identity and philosophy, he shouldn't be so worried about his subordinates' betrayal. Some people say that the combat power is inferior. I guess this is because the characteristics of the Momo Fruit are not extracted for their own use (if it can double the damage, the protagonist will be truly invincible), but even without the Momo Fruit, the protagonist is actually basically invincible, so I personally feel that the combat effectiveness is not very high. I don't know if the author wants to wait until One Piece is finished before finishing this book, and I think the Im written in this book doesn't seem to be a villain at the moment? (Or is it my misunderstanding)

It would look much better without those mind control skills.

Very well written and exciting! The protagonist group has all joined the navy, and the revolutionary army really has no plot at all. Not long after the game starts, the protagonist kills Usopp's father, cuts off the red-haired arm, kills Brother Ming, almost kills Rayleigh, kills the Golden Lion, and kills Blackbeard. There really aren't many pirates left.

I have listened to Chapter 41 so far, and I feel very good and happy. Now the heroine is basically confirmed to be Uta, and she has recruited Luffy, the three little ones and Zoro Nami into the navy. The protagonist is also the one with the strongest connections in the navy, and her own strength is also good.

Well, it looks pretty good. The protagonist kills decisively and the popular female protagonists and supporting actresses should be paid attention to. Just take it away and eat it directly. After all, there are many beauties and navy beauties in One Piece!

Read it at night until the lights go out, and five stars float in the palm of your hand like fireflies✨. The pages of the book turn, the sound of wind passing through the bamboo forest🍃; The words fell to the ground, like the echo of raindrops falling into a deep pool💧. Good books are not noisy, but they quietly awaken the soul. In silence, there is light.