I Can't Get Any More Beautiful!

I really, really like this big-written article. I have read basically all the books she wrote, and they are all (mostly) more than an hour long. (Some places may not be fully expressed, and may be added later) --The writing style should be praised. I don't need to praise it anymore. I personally think that both the plot logic and the descriptive framework are great, because they all stick to my xp. --Demining: 1. The heroine is really bad, but not bad in the traditional sense. 2. A heartthrob, a heartthrob, a heartthrob! Both men and women eat it, not selling it as dog meat. 3. They are all crazy critics, regardless of gender! There is a plot of love that cannot be destroyed because of it! 4. According to my current opinion, the previous tradition of no CP will probably continue. 5. From a certain perspective, the heroine is no different from ordinary people! Will be greedy, will have a sense of novelty, and is inherently evil! 6. Don't bring reality! 7. To be added --Demining: 7. I am becoming more and more inclined to the suspense and decryption style (also mixed with crazy criticism and no fixed emotional line), but I like this confusing and exciting feeling! 8. The three views are incorrect. 9. Romance brings delay. 10. Beauty system article, not quick travel, but rebirth. 11. There are many typos, catch bugs → ignore them. 12. Don't look at the low rating. If you don't mind the above mines, you can really take a look! ! ! !

The logic is unclear. I personally feel that there is something wrong with the female protagonist's outlook on life. As a brainless heartthrob, Shuang's story doesn't need to deal with a miserable life experience. As a result, the writing becomes more and more disastrous. It is seriously inconsistent with the performance of the previous article and has logical problems. In short, it is very uncomfortable to watch. I want to give it 1 star, but some people have said that one star will be treated as a malicious negative review. . . .

It's really brain-burning. . But while burning your brain, can you clearly describe the causes of some plots/events? After Chapter 20, I can't understand what the author is writing at all.

It's a good read, but after more than 30 chapters, it gets very complicated. I feel that everyone is in the same game. This kind of writing is not easy to read, and it takes a lot of energy to read. To sum up, it's probably the first 10 or 20 chapters that I understand. I like heartthrobs and want to be beautiful. The latter is more complicated. It involves a lot of things. I feel that there are no emotional lines (not counting emotional lines). It's just that everyone goes around and around and is kept in the dark. I don't know how to describe it. The rest of it is basically skipping and I'm not interested.

I don't know how to explain it, but I can understand it from the front. When I saw Jiang Man, I was confused. Jiang Man was inexplicably allowed to go to the rooftop. There was also Zhou Cheng who suddenly appeared and seduced the elder brother. I don't quite understand. At least tell me how these people provoked the heroine before. I have nothing to say.

In fact, the beginning of the book is quite good, and the setting is quite interesting, but some content that has no trace at all is added later, and it suddenly appears in front of me, which makes it a bit confusing. And I am a book reader. There are too many names and they appear so suddenly that I don't know who it is. It feels like a flashback but not like that. Yes, because the pace is too fast, and it's not the kind where you have a small explanation somewhere and then use it later, emm, it's not that the heroine's revenge on society is not good, but it's a bit inexplicable when you don't understand the cause and effect at all. It seems to be said but not said. Can you give it a try when you are bored?

After reading it, let me tell you my thoughts. It is very confusing, the description is very confusing, the logic is very confusing, there are many typos, and there are also things like the Huo family and the Song family interspersed. Occasionally, some memories come out, and they always describe the misfortune of the protagonist, but the description really makes people have no empathy at all. I can only say that the writing style needs to be improved. There is no logic at all, and the world view is not smoothed out. It feels like it is just going around a small area. It has a population of 12 billion. It says that the world is dangerous, but it does not describe the world view. After reading it, I am still confused. Artificial intelligence has appeared, but the background of the world has not yet been explained. It's an interstellar fantasy or something like that. The protagonist is reborn when he is reborn, and the other supporting characters are not fully explained. I feel that some of the supporting characters have memories of rebirth, and some don't. There is a beauty in the missing brainstem. I feel that the supporting characters are not outstanding and impressive, and the characterization needs to be improved, but it is not easy for the author to encourage him when writing a book.

It's so brainless, everyone will turn into a fool if they take a look at the heroine's hands. Low taste

The author's logic is unclear, and he does not clearly explain the characters' backgrounds and worldviews. Some names appear inexplicably, making it confusing to read. He also floutes the law, is violent and bloody at every turn, and affects the worldview and values ​​of minors. The heroine is reborn 4 times in the middle, and it is not clear when the four times started or the specific content. In the middle, the heroine has a pitiful life experience, is bullied and betrayed by others for no reason, and there is no reason. It feels a bit far-fetched. The beauty transformation system allows the heroine to be charming for three lifetimes, but not everyone in the world will be attracted to it, which is a bit vulgar.

I really like Mingyue and the system inside The bright moon is bright, and the bright moon is only hers, not Jiang Jiaojiao, nor Huo Mingyue. It turned out that she fell in love with someone, but that person didn't love her. Now everyone loves her, but she doesn't love anyone. The author has created the character of Mingyue very well. I don't know how to evaluate her because I am not qualified. All I can do is watch her perfect her character step by step. I hope the author brings more surprises. Thanks!