Becoming a Slave: Bought by a Rich Young Girl

The background of the story is described quite well, and the emotional details of the male protagonist and Loli are also described very delicately. I gave four stars because I think the relationship between the male protagonist and Elaine was handled well in the early stage. I felt that she helped the male protagonist so much, but the male protagonist just sold his body [thinking]. Even if it was because of her liking, it seemed that the male protagonist was a bit aggrieved, just shy and avoidant. He also didn't face his feelings with Elaine head-on. (Of course, it may be that I haven't seen enough of it) In short, it's still very good. Finally, I hope the author will add a label for single or multiple female protagonists, which will be more intuitive [love] [love] [love] No, I really can't stand it anymore after reading Chapter 260. Elaine fought against the Queen of Pearl to resist the pressure for you. You bitch kept saying no for a long time but refused to fight. After a while, the loli came and started to reminisce about the past and admit her mistakes. No, bro, this is a battlefield. People are fighting there for you, and you are having sex there. Isn't it because Elaine can't remember how good she is to you? The first name was saved by others, the slave contract was solved by others, and the information about Yanxing was also provided by others. Even if you like a man, you have to help her during the fight. Keli's bomb is not used, and the rack she got cannot be opened. Just kiss me and me with that loli, so regardless of the occasion, big brother [laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh] To be honest, I am not a female copper, but if I change the gender of Lu Daiyu, the score will be higher...

First of all, I want to support the author. The new book is quite interesting, warm, innocent and beautiful (I hope the author won't give too many blows, otherwise it will become a plague and become depressing and not healed🐶) In the early stage, the protagonist has just started, and it is normal to have no burning point. Just keep updating, and it will get better. Oh, by the way, this book is a harem novel and there won't be many female protagonists. (What Fei Miao said🐶)

Very beautiful and attractive, good luck to the author

I support it, it's very interesting, the plot is smooth and it shows the witch's yandere seriousness in a relatively detailed way [sneaky laugh] [sneaky smile] [sneaky smile] [sneaky smile]

Great book! It really hit my mark, I really can't stand loli + different world + harem [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration]. I hope the author can combine work and rest and update more!

I originally thought it was the kind of novel that was all porn and no plot. I didn't expect the world view to be so big. Added elements of h but now there is no H. The plot and pace are both good, neither too slow nor too slow. The writing style can also be very descriptive. I hope the author can grasp the outline and rhythm and go slowly, if possible.

Compared to the pairing of the male and female protagonists in this work, I prefer Jedalu and Lilika in Seal of Grazesta. The male protagonist is also a slave in the beginning. Although Jedalu is a mercenary, he is more masculine than the male protagonist in this game. Regarding the persona of the male protagonist, a cheerful big boy who is a top student, there is a feeling of girliness that lingers between the lines after time travel, and his various performances are far different from that of a top school boy (maybe it's because Yanxing's sunny top student is different from Blue Star's) (or maybe it's the various blushes that give me the illusion of a tomboy). I have read about a hundred chapters, and aside from complaining about the male protagonist, the plot is pretty good, and I hope it will be followed by a harem route [laughing evilly]. The score is still high

Great, come on, Baozi, this is my first comment since I rated it, and I give it to you (´∀｀)♡

Compared with those embarrassing articles, this book is very good.

The content and plot of the book are very good, but it's a pity that the author has just started, and I haven't felt so serious about reading a novel for a long time. [Working on the manuscript] [Eating melon], author, please do it [please update] [note] [laughing]