I’m the Lord of the Heavenly Dao Hall! All My Disciples Are Traitorous Apprentices

This book is light-hearted and humorous, without any plot of bitterness and hatred, and is updated steadily! In addition, the author is extremely considerate. If readers are not satisfied with what they read, they can just turn around and read what they like. There is no need to waste your precious time and leave negative reviews. If the author's words cause discomfort to the boss, please seek medical treatment as soon as possible.

This book can be of a high standard and is worth reading

I think it's good if this book follows this trend, which is the development between the female protagonist and the male protagonist. I can't say it's slow, I just look anxious. Reading is about reading stories in other people's minds, not reading stories in one's own mind. If you really want to read it but don't like it being written poorly, just write one yourself.

I really like the character design of the third disciple. The ending is also perfect. I gave birth to a pair of twins with Chen Xuan. The hole in the Pangu ax was also filled in. The author is really attentive. There are many people saying what happened to the second disciple and her sister. In fact, I think it is okay. The character design in the early stage is slightly lacking. After all, ordinary people's vision is the same in the long term before they have seen a wider world. Before she knew Chen Xuanqian didn't know how powerful he was. In the fantasy world, it is normal for the survival of the fittest to follow the strong. She was not familiar with Chen Xuan at first, so she rejected the offer to become a disciple. Nuo knew that Chen Xuan was powerful from the beginning and would naturally accept the apprenticeship. However, if you miss something, you will miss it. This is normal. The first, second, fourth and fifth disciples each have their own independent characters, which are very vivid and vivid. The character descriptions of other important supporting characters such as the Emperor are also very vivid, and each one has its own character and personality. Finally, let's talk about the protagonist. Sometimes he is very characterful, but sometimes he feels a bit... (Can't go into details [laughing evilly]) But he is not brainless, and there is no drama like pretending to be a pig to eat the tiger. He is strategic and has a harem, but he has less interactions with his disciples. The above are all my own thoughts after reading it [currently in the process of finalization] If you don't like it, don't blame it. Otherwise it will rebound! Bounce! Bounce!

I've read 50 chapters, and it's pretty good. It's an innovation to a certain extent. This book combines the invincibility within the sect at the beginning with the return of disciples. The overall style is relatively relaxed. No matter what the conspiracy is, it can be broken with force. The female disciples of various styles indeed increase the watchability and gossip value. Come on, author, keep writing in this style. In the later stage, there will be more Shura field and harem competition, and the level will be slightly suppressed. It seems that it will be written to the immortal level soon, too fast! The first story was raised by three levels. It is easy for the system to collapse later. You can set the early, middle, late and half steps of the same level to increase the writing space. In terms of geography, you usually go through the east, west, south, north, and middle. Finally, before flying to immortality, there will be a race confrontation or something like that. Write down the hot blood points. I use my For example, Blood Recommends Xuanyuan, the female protagonist sacrifices for the sake of national justice. After the male protagonist learns about it, she rushes to the scene and burns her own cultivation to resurrect her. This way, once the male protagonist loses his level, he has writing space. You can add a copy to write about the female protagonist going into a special space to treat the male protagonist. This can also be a foreshadowing if necessary. That's all I have to say, mainly because I sincerely hope that the author can write a long and well-written article, and I hope it can be helpful to the author.

This book is very well written... I like to read master-disciple love harem stories, they are all pretty good [Cool][Cool]

This is the better regional invincibility article I have ever read! ! I have seen before that once you leave the invincible zone, you become a mortal! Even though I have no strength, I still like to go out and have fun. Then use some more embarrassing plots to round it off. Add a master-disciple relationship! It's so damn hard to watch. . This book is great! Spend some system points! Still invincible outside the area. Really invincible. . . It's very comfortable to look at. .

One, it's really invincible. It's really fun to watch, and the style has overflowed the screen. Second, it is really humorous and really exciting to watch. Sometimes when my wife looks at me giggling, her eyes are similar to looking at Chi Yun. Worth a look!

I'll give five stars first. The author writes very well. I support it and hope to keep up the good work. This book has been on the road while driving. It is astringent and very delicious.

This is my first review to give five stars! ! I have to say that this book is indeed worth reading. I accidentally read it all night long. The protagonist's invincible fighting power is really to my appetite. Come on, the author should update five chapters a day. Thank you! (Although I feel like I want to eat shit)