Global Lord: My Succubus Warriors Are Unmatched

First of all, some things are written with a weak sense of immersion. For example, the mechanical hammer developed in the field of science fiction has a 10% chance of causing an explosion when it attacks. It seems that the writing has not been carefully thought out. Secondly, the writing style is a little bit worse. Also, if you don't know how to write emotional scenes, we can try to skip these and write the results directly. It's like the leader of the snake people you subjugated became jealous when he saw your two succubi when he entered the territory. The writing feels a bit insulting to your IQ.

Why do you have so few succubus troops? [Pouts] You are also considering getting an Elf. I'll change it to five stars later in the plot [face covering]

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Can you write it more clearly? The introduction is unclear.

Come on, hit the workers

Made of nanometal, it needs to be repaired

Emmm. . . I'm so confused, I've read a few chapters and don't know anything.

I feel like the protagonist is a bit like a virgin [smile]

Not bad,,,

It looks okay.