The Maxed-Out Expert Is Determined to Win the Motherland's Support

It looks good, but there are too few. Share with classmates during the day. Saved the book famine. But I accidentally saw this place in one breath

It's very interesting! The emotional lines between the male and female protagonists are very well written, and the character of the female protagonist, who is a top student, is really cool! Even now, I can feel that the female protagonist loves her family, but I can't tell how much the female protagonist's mother loves her.

It would be nice if there was a character relationship diagram, there are so many names [I'm almost crying][I'm almost crying] After reading it for so long, I still feel uncomfortable. Is the author a newbie? It's okay in the big frame, but the character description is very average. Whether it's to describe the heroine's powerful abilities or to make the male and female protagonists sweet, it's not quite right. It's very stiff, unable to empathize, and not delicate enough. I suggest that the author can give more psychological descriptions and the language can be more lively, otherwise it will be too dry. In addition, the love between the male protagonist and the female protagonist is completely invisible. It is like two people who have only met a few times and are not very familiar with each other, and suddenly want to kiss. It is very jarring. The transition is not natural enough. Also, when describing one aspect, can the author also take other things into consideration? For example, when writing about a competition, can't he include a little communication with his family? The heroine's mother and brother really have no sense of existence. At least they make phone calls occasionally.

Personally, I think the author's writing is quite good. It's not easy to write a book, but you should read it and cherish it. I would like to give you a good review to encourage you. The heroine has so many vests, so many that it makes people feel bad. The hero really dotes on the heroine to no end, and there is no limit to his doting on his wife.

It's pretty good to watch. In terms of CP, the male and female protagonists are very straightforward and talkative. Even if the female protagonist is usually cold-tempered, she still has a little girl side in front of the male protagonist. The female protagonist also has a good career. In the early stage, it was a daily competition when she was a student. She made many good friends, which laid the foundation for these friends to become reliable helpers for the heroine in the future. In the mid-term, she researched high technologies for the development of her country. The progress was fast and it was very enjoyable to watch. What can I say, I personally don't like the chapters of the Holt family that revolve around the An family jade pendant in the last third. It's a bit long-winded and I can't read it. I almost read it in one glance and ten lines. The final ending was a bit rushed and I felt a little anxious. If the plot of the enemy in the later part was less written, or it would be more satisfying to deal with the enemy, and more about daily research or daily life after giving birth, I might like it more. Personal opinion! I personally like CP in this kind of patriotic scientific research article. After all, in addition to rigorous daily scientific research, the protagonist should also have his own beautiful love and happy life. Of course, the premise of this must be that the protagonist has invincible abilities. Otherwise, he really doesn't have that much energy. Generally speaking, this book is a collection of rebirth/revenge/scientific research/patriotism/double strength/1V1 sweet pets. Friends who are interested can read it!

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It's a pity that there is no extra episode. I think the villain dies too quickly, not normally fast, although it looks very cool this way. Then there is the question of whether this research is too fast, which shows that it is extremely urgent. [Thinking][thinking]

I think it's pretty good. The plot is not sluggish at all, and there are very few top-notch characters. The female protagonist is very powerful, and the male protagonist is also good. Personally, I feel that there is a lot of scientific research, but very little about cultivating immortals. Sometimes I forget that there is a setting of cultivating immortals. This novel seems to be very satisfying. The later stages are a bit intellectually depressing, and in this novel, the golden elixir stage is like the Qi training stage, which is quite weak.

Not to mention other good or bad things, I only know that I like the way China rises up in a leap, and it can be peaceful or soaring.

I almost feel that the author is a physicist, and the writing about physics is very detailed, but I feel that the interaction between the heroine and them did not capture my funny point, and it is a bit boring. I can add some popular Internet terms appropriately, otherwise reading this novel will feel as boring as reading a text. Come on, the author [top post][top post]