Elysia, Lock Up the Shared Captain

I followed Tomato from Miyoushe. I really like this kind of imaginary world, a world without collapse, and I can experience the emotions of the characters that I didn't expect. But why, Mr. Luo, is the update of Miyushe so slow? ! !

What The Land of the Past recorded is such a simple story. The heroes and warriors were just ordinary people with complex emotions and flaws. Just like every human being at that time, they had their own selfish motives, and most of them could not talk about great love. However, they would also be moved or whim to do some impulsive and remarkable things. Well, they were never perfect heroes, just because they were the ones who appeared there at that time. Because of this, this is beautiful eternity. You are destined to be unable to read all my stories, or even appreciate a corner of the whole picture. The whole life of thirteen people is such a complicated but wonderful thing. ——The Paradise of the Past "Hengkai III" Comments: It's actually quite good. It would be nice if the characters' personalities were more consistent with the original (original game). The second is that I didn't expect to add the captain. In fact, personally speaking, on the basis of the CP set in Honkai Impact 3, it would be better to remove other CPs (personal suggestion doge) (personal suggestion, after all, everyone sees it from a different perspective)) The rest is still very good in my opinion (˃ ⌑ ˂ഃ ) Come on

There are not many Honkai books in this style, and the ones written by the author are okay. Just seeing the behavior of Alicia and the captain, I feel like I want to chop the captain into pieces.

As a derivative novel of the game Honkai Impact 3, or a derivative novel of Zhuhuo 13 Yingjie, it is actually very good (mainly because no one on the market writes this style, and they only write plots in the game, so novelty accounts for a large part), and the plot has Long Aotian's attributes are only reduced in concentration, and some jokes and self-creations are added to make the whole article less vulgar and not too profound (to be honest, I really can't understand what the author wrote, why didn't I see it when I was playing the plot) )) is within an acceptable range for me, and the writing style is also good. Although there are too many emojis and it's a bit tiring, but overall, it's 5 stars. (Another: c, it's too short and not enough to read. You'll lose interest in reading this kind of article after a while...)

There are too many "beautiful things" in the main plot, so it feels very warm to watch this daily life [laughs] and then the author rushes to update it [learned]

A very heart-warming daily article, the writing is good, the thirteen-year-old is very charming, it really pokes fun at me! Recommend! And the updates are very stable [smile] except for one or two updates a day which are a little bit appetizing [roll eyes]

Although the language in this book is not very gorgeous, it is extremely accurate and vivid, with rich and real emotions. It is fascinating and enjoyable to read. The article is full of "passion" and makes people "bloody". Each character is vivid and distinctive, creating a warm and beautiful daily life for the heroes and heroines. Although it is a casual daily article, the author's views on society are revealed between the lines. The details in the article are the finishing touch, and you can't help but be amazed when you look back and reread it. In particular, the captain created by the author has the feeling of a dragon king's son-in-law, which vividly displays the scumbag image of the protagonist. However, in addition to the scumbag image, the protagonist also has another side such as gentleness, caring and responsibility, which also shows that people are multi-faceted. Of course, the excitement of this book is far more than that. The articles come from life, so although the language is not very beautiful, it is real and interesting, and the writing is emotional and reasonable.

A very warm daily article, especially engaging. I hope Lao Luo will update it soon [Blow kiss]

It's beautiful. It expresses what I want in my heart. There is no collapse, only warmth and daily life. I like it so much! [Smile][smile][smile]

It looks good, but I feel a little stuck when I go to Eden. But it's still very beautiful, but I'm short of words and can't say anything good. Anyway, it looks good. There are a lot of cheche [smile] [smile] [smile]