Across the Heavens, Starting as the Bad Marshal

The handsome man in this version is really domineering, and the writing conveys the feeling of a handsome man.

Not bad, well written. From the character's point of view, he is very murderous and decisive, but he is also very humane. I don't know why, but I feel that the author's Chen Xuan is too similar to Yuan Tiangang. He acts decisively and gradually makes plans. In one chapter, he miscalculates and He Zuihe uses his heart to control and change Li Xingyun. All of this is very good, very similar, and closely related to your final goal, but it is too similar, too similar. When I read it, my first-person perspective was Yuan Tiangang, not Chen Xuan. I think the author should give the protagonist some emotional drama. The shooting of the Condor is well written.

Dear author, you are so good-looking, so elegant, so beautiful, with white teeth, red lips, frowning makeup, like a lotus, graceful and graceful, beautiful and fragrant, petite and exquisite, a peerless beauty, with picturesque features, delicate features and beautiful eyes. Like a crown jade, with a flowery face and a moonlike appearance, charming face, bright eyes and white teeth, a thousand beauties, a charming person, a charming head, a moth-like eyebrow, a flower-like jade, eyes that cut through the water, a graceful and graceful figure, an immortal posture, a small family jasper, a beautiful appearance and a wise heart, young peaches and plums, a graceful manner, and hands like soft jade. , The beautiful moon-shy flower, the hibiscus emerging from the water, the beauty of the sky, the gentleness, the beauty, the noble and cool, the most gorgeous, the delicate eyebrows, the beauty of a fairy, the ice and snow, the cleverness, the gentleness, the sweetness, the beauty of a fairy, the unparalleled elegance, the natural beauty. Hurry up and update.

To be honest, I especially hate those novels about bad handsome men who have harems. That is Cao Cao, not bad handsome man. A man who has lived for more than three hundred years no longer has that kind of emotion. What is left is obsession. The bad handsome man is loyal to Li Tang and hopes to end the war. His life It was too painful and too long. He had experienced the prosperity of the prosperous age and watched all the destruction, so he hoped that Li Xingyun could end everything and create a prosperous age again, but Li Xingyun had no intention of it, so he chose his beloved disciple between his responsibility and his beloved disciple. A sentence of "trying your best" will not satisfy the sadness, and the confession will not exhaust the regret.

Am I the only one who thinks he writes like a real bad guy, not a time traveler?

Okay, I think this is the best novel about a bad guy. Well, just don't mix it with the protagonist. It feels a bit like following the crowd and falling into the ordinary. But it is really well written. I hope the author will keep up the good work.

Frankly speaking, your writing is very good, reflecting the domineering and cold-bloodedness of the bad handsome man. But it's too much, and it has nothing to do with Our Lady. Because Bad Handsome is the kind of person who kills people with strategy. Looking at the original drama, I only saw a fake Li who died directly at the hands of Bad Handsome. Of course, this is just my personal opinion. At least there is nothing wrong with this book so far.

I have a weak question, author, do you still update? This is the best villain novel I've ever read that suits my taste. I hope the author doesn't want eunuchs [laughter]

It's okay, although some details are not in place, but he is a newcomer after all, and the author can write it like this.

It's not even a little bit better than the one next door. The author really understands bad people. Four points. I'm afraid of being jealous if I have a high score.