Across the Heavens, Starting as the Bad Marshal

This version of the warlord is truly domineering; the portrayal captures the essence of the warlord.

That's good, very well written. The character is ruthless and decisive, yet still retains humanity. I don't know why, but I feel that the Chen Xuan you created is so much like Yuan Tiangang. He acts decisively, gradually sets up plans, and then miscalculates in one chapter, and finally uses his heart to control and change Li Xingyun.

Author, you are so beautiful, so elegant, so stunningly beautiful, with breathtaking beauty, white teeth and red lips, a delicate and charming appearance, like a lotus emerging from water, graceful and charming, a national treasure, petite and exquisite, an unparalleled beauty, with picturesque features, clear and bright eyes, as beautiful as jade, with a face like a flower and the moon, flawless…

To be honest, I particularly dislike novels that portray a villainous general as having a harem. That's Cao Cao, not the villainous general. A man who has lived for over three hundred years no longer has those kinds of emotions; what remains is obsession. The villainous general is loyal to the Tang Dynasty and hopes to end the war. His life has been too bitter and too long.

Am I the only one who thinks he writes like a real delinquent leader, rather than a time traveler?

Yes, this is the best novel in the Bad Guys series that I think is written. Well, it's just that you shouldn't hang out with the protagonist, otherwise it feels a bit like you're just going with the flow and falling into the ordinary. But it's really well written, and I hope the author will continue to work hard.

To be honest, you wrote very well, capturing the domineering and cold-blooded nature of the Bad Commander. However, it went a bit too far, which has nothing to do with being a saint. Because the Bad Commander is the kind of person who kills through strategy; looking at the original series, I only saw one person, a fake Li, die directly at his hands. Of course, this is just my personal opinion; at least so far, the book doesn't have any major flaws.

Just wondering, author, are you still updating? This is the most satisfying Bad Guys novel I've ever read, I hope you won't abandon it! 😏

It's alright. Although some details are lacking, considering the author is a newcomer, it's already quite good.

It's far superior to the one next door; the author truly understands the world of Bad Guys. Four stars, afraid of being envied if the score is too high.