Pregnant and Fighting My Way Through the Apocalypse

This is my first novel. I lack experience, my writing is immature, the character portrayals are not ideal, and sometimes the words are not clear enough. I will improve on these in the future. First, the earlier plot moved a bit too fast, neglecting many details. The pacing will slow down a little later on, but not by much, just a slight difference.

It's pretty good. The female lead is intelligent but not a saint, which is my type. Keep up the good work, author!

The book's content feels like a framework; the author could try expanding on it, perhaps by adding more descriptions of language, appearances, environments, and details, in a 1:3 or 1:5 ratio, to make the book richer and more complete.

Keep it up, author! You're awesome! 😊

It's pretty good. It's the first post-apocalyptic novel I've read where the female lead is pregnant with twins and the male lead doesn't have a powerful background. The female lead isn't a saint, and she doesn't have any weird relatives. Later, because a certain base kept causing trouble, she created her own powerful base. Within the base, she built a learning hospital, a planting area, and so on.

The female lead's cousin just disappeared while I was reading. Did the author forget to write him down? 🤦

The ending felt rushed, but overall it was alright.

This book is very well written, I really like it. 😘

It's a bit simple, but it's already very good, five stars! I'll give you extra points. Keep it up! The next one will be even better. [Bump]

It's a good read. The early chapters are a bit immature, but the later chapters are much more mature.