The Horror Cruise Game

The overall writing is okay, but it can be seen that this is probably the first time I have written it. Come on, the author, and keep up the good work. It's just that sometimes the leap is a bit big, like in the end, one second I was confessing my love while being supervised on the island, and the next second I was back on the mainland. You can write about the police raiding the house, the mermaid in black breaking the net, the hostage-taking and the protagonist's battle of wits. Otherwise, your ending will be like foreign entrepreneurs and most of the men in black running away again. Do you want to play the game for a third time? In fact, it is not impossible. In this case, it is best to end with a meaningful ending. Write a sentence. A child on the roadside picked up a card and wrote the words "cruise game invitation". This will leave a suspense.

I guess it was the first time for the author to write a book, and it was very difficult. Many people read it. It probably took a lot of energy and time, and there was almost no income, so I can only summarize it in a hurry. No matter what, I still hope that the author can continue to hold on to his dream! If it comes true, go for it!

If you are really short of books, you can read it👀 [Note]

Naked humanity, the real status quo

The author writes a little less