Senior Brother, You're Late to the Rescue

Here I come, the first drawback: the title of the book is not good and not attractive enough. Disadvantage 2: You don't need to write the inner monologue in parentheses. Or maybe add a sidebar monologue at the end of the chapter, but generally no one would write this kind of thing. And too many times is not conducive to attracting high-quality readers. Flaw 3: The task issued by the system is what I think is the biggest flaw. The original owner was abandoned by his parents in an orphanage when he was four years old because of his excessive appetite. However, the task issued by the system is to find the biological parents and protect them to survive in the end of the world? I think most people may not accept this, or this setting can be changed. For example, when a baby is born, he is replaced by a civet cat for a prince, his biological parents are rich or other settings, and he eats a lot and is abandoned by his adoptive parents. This is still acceptable. Advantages: It is a novel novel about the rebirth of a fairy cultivator and a post-apocalyptic survival story, at least from my perspective as a bookworm of more than ten years. Judging from the content of these chapters, we can see that the heroine has a funny, silly, and a bit clever character. I have a feeling that if this article is well written, it will become popular. After all, who doesn't love funny girls? Haha, I just like sand sculpture girls. However, I have written too little, so I can only give these suggestions at the moment. The writing is good, and you can see that a lot of effort has been put into this article.

The author's ideas are relatively novel and the story background is rich and colorful. It is worth recommending!

Well, I came here just to join the group.

It is indeed difficult to be an author of a new book. I am the second one to write a paragraph review, so I read and listened at the same time. Follow the author's footsteps all the way. I hope that the author will write better and better, and that there will be more and more readers.

I hope the little fat girl will become more and more beautiful and awesome.

It's beautiful, senior brother, I'm so touched 🤦 🤦 Seriously, the author's writing is smooth and needs to be delicate and the story told clearly. This work slowly opens the door to the world of immortality from a female perspective, which is refreshing. Especially the choking system plot at the beginning is funny. Looking forward to a big update from the author. Oh, let me say a few words for senior brother, don't abuse others too much 🤭 🤭

Come on come on come on come on

Good book, good people, so touching! Senior brother, I won't hesitate to lose you! Expect!

This lady is so funny. The system is really worried about my IQ. Haha, it's so funny. Please give me support and cheers. It's great.

The author's ideas are really refreshing. Readers who like to read about systems and books can take a look. It's quite good! Come on!