Heavenly Fox Empress: Disciple, That's Not How You Show Filial Piety

Support the author greatly, come on, give it to Ollie! Write it to me, I hope the writing will get better and better, and I also hope the little guy will grow up healthily and happily! I wish the author a happy life

It's pretty good so far, but I feel like there are too many descriptions of the real world. The common problem with Two Worlds is that the other world is written well, but the real events are long and boring, and the routines are the same. You can know what to write even if you don't read it. Keep up the good work and update quickly.

The grass setting at the beginning of this book is very interesting. The author has greatly improved it. Don't be so short [laughing]. Update quickly [please update] Highly recommended! Come and see more people! Make this book popular now. Then urge the author to update. Three chapters a day is not enough [please update]

The plot of the novel is still very good. I would like to make a small suggestion. It can be more foreshadowing and foreshadowing. Don't write too clearly. This is better. Also, if Lu Youyou really wants to develop, there should be some emotional line foreshadowing. It can't be too abrupt, otherwise it will be a mindless and cool novel.

It's very good-looking, but a little short. It's quite similar to the one I read before, but this one is about two worlds, which is quite innovative [Chigua][Chigua]

It's okay. If you've just read this book, I suggest you be more tolerant. The protagonist's actions in the middle may be a little uncomfortable, but this is mainly for the development of the plot later. The author can only modify the protagonist's actions. Because it does seem a bit selfish in the middle, but it feels normal in the environment of the male protagonist. There is nothing else except that the reader will feel a little uncomfortable watching it. Author: Every cause must have an effect. If you like this kind of subject matter, it doesn't matter if you ignore the flaws and read on (／_＼)

I think it's pretty good, but there are still some poisonous points that cannot be avoided. In the early stage, the protagonist was forcibly reduced, and in the later stage, it felt very double-standard, and very selfish, and even a bit like a supercilious. Why do you say that the protagonist is a bit supercilious? All the resources he has been provided by the Alliance since he was a child, but the protagonist does not have any good sense of belonging to the Human Alliance, and he does not even have a sense of the overall situation. But it is obvious that the author is also seriously changing it. This is good, let's slowly shape it. Later, my brother insisted and kept watching it and it would look good. Anyway, one sentence is worth recommending.

It would have been five stars if the ending wasn't too rushed. He said that if the ending had been better written, it would probably have been above 9.5. I recommend everyone to read this book. They all have the same feedback as me, just give it four stars. It's a pity that it doesn't have four and a half stars. If I could give it four and a half stars.

People's shortcomings and advantages are all related to the environment in which they grow up. Many people criticize pig trotters for teaching Yang Xiaohu the exercises, but think about it if there is a super-beautiful girl who has been with you in the slums for more than ten years and has endured hardships for you, pretended to be ugly for many years in order not to cause trouble for you, and is always thinking of you and leaving the best things in your heart to your wife. Don't tell me that it would be a big deal even if she risked her life to teach you the exercises!

This book is very well written, that is, in terms of cultivation, it is a little confusing. For someone like me who can read ten lines at a time, sometimes it is a little unclear, but it does not affect the reading. The viewing experience is very good. Come on, author, update quickly, the update is too slow.