Submission

The male protagonist's tone of invading Qin Quan is the same as that of Lou Xiao, both of them are cynical people.

The beginning is good, the male protagonist is my type. A bit naughty, a bit crazy, and likes to test the edges of danger, much like Lou Xiao in Daytime. I don't know why, but the chapters are repeated and reversed. The plot behind it is a bit cliché, and there aren't enough details about the male protagonist's fight against the old man, but overall it's pretty good. So I read another book by the author called Misfire, but unfortunately I didn't finish it.

I really feel like this novel is okay, why doesn't anyone read it?

It looks good, but it seems like sometimes it can't connect.

Although the author made mistakes in writing the characters in some places, the overall plot is very exciting. The male protagonist did a lot of things for the female protagonist, and the female protagonist did not know it or even misunderstood it. Fortunately, the female protagonist has a brain and a mouth, and they are still together again.

God, I really like it! The author's writing is really great. Although there are some minor flaws, they do not affect the overall look and feel. I hope the author can write better and more excellent works in the future!

It really depends on the routines. The author has many routines. From the beginning, I thought Jiang Wan might be an ordinary heroine who faces various difficulties after getting together with the hero. I never expected that so many powerful relatives would be added to the heroine later. The hero is always with the heroine from the beginning to the end. But I like it, I like the kind of emotional drama that always surrounds the hero and heroine, without all kinds of work details and other messy things. But did the author mix up another work with this one? Who is Jin Si and Jiang You, and why is Jin Ye and Bai Yue? Isn't Bai Yue Mrs. Shen? Why does Jin Ye still like Jiang You? Are these names also used in another work? When reading these two paragraphs, just ignore them by default. Overall, they are quite good, so I give them full ⭐!

I finished reading it in one go. The male protagonist and female protagonist are both very good. It's so interesting. Come on, the author, for more [crying][crying][crying]

The emotional description is delicate and the characters are interesting.

Very good story compact