Superpowered Showdown

It looks okay now. The protagonist's strength has been maintained, and the villain's combat power has not collapsed. We can dig some holes appropriately. Regarding the plot, there is nothing to complain about. The author also said that he has his own plan. I hope the plot can unfold or advance faster.

The excellence of this book lies in the world view and setting. The various superpowers are really interesting, the characters are rich, and the writing is acceptable. However, the characters are not well established enough, and the plot progress is a bit inexplicable. Of course, some changes in the text are not very consistent with ordinary people's cognition and thinking patterns, which makes people suspicious. It may be related to the theme of apocalyptic novels. However, if the background is laid out and high-dimensional development is done, and some useless and vulgar plots are dealt with, it may become a very good work. Thank you to the author.

This book is really well written. Keep up the good work, the author [top post]. The setting and description of conceptual abilities in the book are quite novel. I hope it will become more and more exciting in the future. Although there don't seem to be many people reading it now, treasure books will always be discovered slowly (just like when The Lost City of Beasts first came out, no one read it but now it is a top-rated tomato book) [Please update]

It's good, but I don't know what the purchasing power of the Blue Star Coin is. It seems to be similar to reality. But in this case, I feel that the male protagonist is invincible and the money given is too little. I even feel that in the eyes of others, it is a cheap and easy-to-use tool, as long as he is not offended. You may not want to write it like this, but this is how it feels to me now.

I originally thought it was just a simple invincible article, but it was so wonderfully written! The descriptions and characterizations of the supporting characters are really awesome. Just like when I originally bought the Want Want gift pack, I just wanted to eat the bag of Want Want senbei inside, but after I opened it, I found that it wasn't just the senbei that was delicious in the gift pack, the entire gift pack dazzled it!

Very nice, I don't know why the score is low It's really poisonous…

Five-star praise, please go to the author

It's pretty good-looking, I give it five stars. Overall, the IQ is above average and the writing is okay. However, the character of the protagonist seems a bit bad. Maybe it's because of his invincibility. But I still hope to have warmth while being cold. At least there should be basic human touch to make the characters more three-dimensional and less flat. Maybe it can be reflected through the psychological description of the protagonist.

I've read Chapter 107 and it seems to be okay so far, but I don't know where the poisonous points everyone mentioned are. I have been very restrained not to hate her, but what happened? 135 Started to be poisonous, 146, 147 was finally disgusted by Bai Keren, and the big speaker, I was really speechless. I have seen 215 of them so far. Let's just say that Bai Keren, a character with a brainstem missing who has a goddess heart and can cry easily, is so perfect and disgusting to the readers. This is really great [laughing]. He was obviously the first one to appear, but he made the character of Bai Keren such a mess. He was either crying or being nosy, crying when he said something wrong and always wronging the male lead. After being together for so long, he still thought that everything was the male lead's fault and reduced him to a heinous person with no conscience at all. To be honest, there is no need. In the first hundred chapters, Bai Keren can be seen as a normal character. In the later chapters, Bai Keren's character has been ruined, so it is better to erase her. Of course, this is impossible because the content of the novel must be written around them. Without Miss White, the novel would be meaningless. Borrowing from what he said to the princess in the story about the princess: "It would have been fun if I had been a bodyguard for you." Now I agree with this sentence so much. When I first read the synopsis, I thought it was a plot surrounding the secret protection of Bai Keren, but it turns out otherwise, Bai Keren is as dispensable as a pendant, and it makes me tired to watch a lot of crying. All in all, there is a reason for the low rating [laughing] Our Madonna, Miss White, is a strong UR woman with a Madonna aura, which makes every reader feel disgusted.

My attitude is similar to those who say this book is poisonous. The plot is okay, but the character creation is really problematic. The quality drops significantly after Chapter 140. I can't stick to it now. I will give the author a rating before I leave. I read the comments and the author has a very good attitude, so I won't say anything more and will just give it five stars to support it. If we talk about the actual rating, it can only be three stars, which is almost acceptable.