The Outcast: Enemies on All Sides

I have been reading a book on Tomato for more than an hour, and this is the first time I will give a star review. I have read various books such as Snow in the Snow, Jian Lai, Dali, etc., But there is no shortage of my reviews for these books. No matter how other readers distinguish good books from bad books, for me, no matter what the writing technique is, if you can read it and have the desire to continue reading, then in my opinion it is a good book, and this book happens to be it. I saw that there are more than 8,000 people reading this book, but last night I saw that there were only five people there. Therefore, I am selfish. I hope the author can continue writing, regardless of others, so that I can finish the book myself. But I think the driving force for the author to continue writing is the readers. I will do my best to help the author recommend this book, and I sincerely hope that this book will become popular. Great support for the author [like], I support you [love]

I read it in one day, and now I see this one... It's a pity that it's not popular, the writing is not bad. In fact, the writing is good, the plot is good, and the characters are well created. Except for the finale being a bit hasty, there are no shortcomings. There are not many ambiguous plots, which is equivalent to no heroine, and few other characters have CPs, but the author's emotional line is actually okay. I like the character of the chubby Wang Xiaonan, it's so good and great... Every time I fight against the enemy, I end up seriously injured. In order to avenge my friends, I can go to a higher level. In order to protect my friends, I can kill myself together. In order to defend my country, I can sacrifice myself and be assimilated by the elements... Why are you so good, Xiaonan? I cried a little when I saw the ending. It is obvious that after being assimilated, you will become a monster with no thought and no distinction between friend and foe. But why, Xiaonan, do you still fight for China after being assimilated and even forget to heal your comrades? He is obviously dead and has no thoughts. Why? This book is really good, many characters are really dead. . Su Lingfeng's death is also hard to find. Is it because of Xiaonan? Why? Although you interacted a lot, weren't you just close comrades? You obviously could live but you still chose death. . Alas, it's not that I can't understand it. The protagonist Lu Ze also has a very charming personality, a calm and reliable person, and his sister Lu Fan also has a cool personality. It is sad that these two are the only ones left among the original friends. . . Give it a five-star rating and try again if you have the chance.

It is a very good book on the Tomato platform. The story line is clear, the group portraits are well drawn, and the rhythm is quite regular. However, in the later chapters, the narrative scenes switch too frequently, the fighting description paragraphs are too many and even cumbersome, and the ending is a bit hasty.

After reading it for a long time, I finally saw this newly updated chapter. It does have some shortcomings but the flaws are not hidden. I particularly like the author's writing style and the characterization of the characters is also very vivid. I hope there will be more! Also, use less knives o(╥╥)o

Writing about professional martial arts terminology such as swordsmanship requires some research. The author is very attentive

Enemies from all directions, then there should also be support from all directions. An ordinary man is not guilty, but he is guilty of carrying a treasure. He must be able to defend it. It is very interesting. Let's see how to work hard to become stronger. [Learned] [Learned]

The writing is good, the characters are well described, and the story has a sense of imagery. The overall framework is also fully laid out. Keep it up at this level. Good luck to the author [like]. In addition, the title of the book can be changed so that more people can discover this good book.

The author should be a novice. Some paragraphs are too long. The protagonist likes to hide too much, and people around him can see it, but he still has to hide. The story has conflicts to attract readers, but the author's description is a bit deliberate. The plot has climaxes but still tends to be dull. I may continue to read it if I have nothing to do. Writing is not easy. Five stars for you.

The imagination is very strange, the ideas are unconstrained, and the storyline is very compact. The master is hidden among the people, a very good book

Why is such a cute ferret seen as wearing a white scarf😂