HP: May Magic Be with You

The writing is really good. The heroine has a great personality. She doesn't have the common problem in fan fiction that the adult heroine loses her IQ as soon as she crosses over. She also doesn't try to travel back in time to redeem Snape when he was young, making him grateful and never forget it... I think love requires two people to stand at the same height, not that kind of thing. Unequally, most fan fiction heroines travel back in time to give Snape favors and make him fall in love with her (them), but this is a kind of inequality... The love between the heroine and Snape is the real attraction of the soul, not because of kindness or anything else. They stand on the same level as equals and love each other.

I like it very much. This is the first time I have seen this kind of heroine. I feel very good. Ahem, mainly because GGAD is so annoying. Two months of confusion and infatuation, a century of indescribable feelings. My love and I both died in the high tower, and my heart and I both stayed in midsummer.

It's been a long time since I've seen such a wonderful Sri Lankan fanfic that appeals to my taste. Although I haven't watched Star Wars, the author has done a good job and can fully understand the heroine's background. The text description is also very delicate (and he also handles every bug carefully, which I rarely see in Tomato). The characters are not OOC, and there is no school discrimination (very rare). The plot development is also very smooth. The only flaw is that Sri Lanka's appearance frequency is not very high so far 😂 I hope to see more Sri Lankan appearances in the future

Oh, I like this kind of slow-burning style so much (mainly because Sri Lankan's feeling is suitable for slow-burning people, and it's impossible to fall in love with him right away). Although Sri Lankan teaching and Ariana don't have much interaction, I feel like I can see a little bit of the chemical reaction between them hahaha. I hope I'm not wrong, but the one I want to praise the most is Da Da. It's great. I'm very curious about Star Wars now. I must read it after the exam. The overall story rhythm is also very good. I want to read a few chapters before reading it but I can't stop it at all😭. In the end, I really hope that the cp will not be changed. Sri Lanka is really suitable for Ariana [shy][shy][shy] In short, it is very well written! ! ! Don't worry, you won't be disappointed! ! (It's one of the better ones among the fanfics I've read!) Help, I still have a lot of things I want to write😭. I'll add a longer one when it's finished [Sending my heart][Sending my heart][Sending my heart]

This book has broken all the fixed plots of HP's fanfics since the first grade, and then he continued the style in the second grade. I don't know what will happen in the third grade, and what will happen later, but as long as I continue to follow it, I will continue to follow it. Overall, this is a very, very, very good fanfic. Due to the limited knowledge I have learned, I am too short of words and cannot express it well.

The plot is very coherent. It was the first time I saw the heroine who traveled from Star Wars to HP, and I also saw a different Dumbledore (PS: I didn't use Legilimency on the heroine or I soon suspected that the heroine was not a good person or something). Come on, the author. I caught a few bugs in the new chapter. I hope the author will change it soon.

I really like Anduin and Ariana! ! ! Come to life! My sweetheart! ! ! I hope that Anduin will appear in Durmstrang's team during Goblet of Fire, and then there will be a whole recognition article! ! ! Come on, I really like them both! ! ! They were in the previous world, so I hope they can be in this world! ! Woooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo,, ,, was was was it was my delusion, but I really want to think about it so much, woo woo." ! ! Super pretty! Super invincible and beautiful! ! Super invincible explosion looks great! ! ! I love watching it! ! ! ! ! ! Hehehehehehehe [licking the screen] It's not impossible to teach Sri Lanka hehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehe[licking the screen]

It's so good. I declare this to be the best Harry Potter fanfic on Tomato. I really watched it over and over again. The only drawback is that it's not finished yet.

This is the most beautiful HP article I have ever seen [Love] Come on, it's really cool to be CP with Sif, okay? And the emotional line is also very obvious in the later stage. I really like it [laughs] [laughs] I was a little confused at the beginning (personal problem), but after I understand it later, I will find the highlights of this book, and then I will like it very much. Every day is a day of waiting for updates [please update] Author, please give it a try! !

I thought this book was awesome! ! ! The plot is great, and the heroine's character is also very interesting to me! ! Moreover, the heroine is rational, smart, and astute. Of course, the most important thing is that the heroine does not seem to be a love-minded person, nor does she blush easily when facing the opposite sex. This is really great! ! ! Big cheers for the author! Thank you for helping us by the way when you produce your own food! (It would be great if it can be more explosive [shy][shy])