Urban Rebirth: I Turn Out to Be a Rich Second-Generation Cannon Fodder

Overall, it's well-written and doesn't have any major problems so far. It's worth reading, and there are some innovative points in it. However, I feel it's a bit inappropriate to list the realm divisions and such in a separate chapter at the beginning. Ideally... Each chapter should have a separate postscript. After all... Many people don't like reading these things.

Let me give you my review. The author keeps emphasizing that they are a novice, and indeed, the beginning wasn't very good. The main problem was the sudden appearance of characters, which felt abrupt. Later on, some random plot points also popped up unexpectedly. However, one thing is certain: the author's writing became smoother as they progressed, which is a good thing. I look forward to Tomato producing another excellent author.

The subject matter is novel and the idea is refreshing. It would be appropriate to add a romantic subplot, such as adding a fiancée. There are also multiple pairs of chosen ones making moves to add some fun. If possible, let's add some that only involve rebirth with the original memories. Also, don't kill off every main character.

I liked the story because the prologue clearly explained some of its settings, even though the writing style was a bit too simplistic 🤦 but I could still read it. I really love this kind of invincible single-female-lead story. It's a bit of a shame the ending felt rushed because of poor readership 😢. Looking forward to the next one!

Well, how should I put it? This book gives me a strange feeling; it always feels like something's missing. It's like a dish that tastes off if you don't add a certain seasoning. After all, the author has said that he's a novice, so it's normal to miss something. Overall, though, it's pretty good.

It's a pity it's too short. I want to see a story where the protagonist isn't the main character or the villain, but someone who goes to save those unfortunate people, whether they're the villain, the protagonist, or even a female villain—anyone who's been wronged by fate, and they go to help them.

Keep it up, don't be lazy.

The author writes very well, but the female lead seems to lack presence, and the male lead doesn't seem to care much about her.

Today is the same as always

This is the first time I've seen a villain with a single female lead.