Urban Rebirth: I Turn Out to Be a Rich Second-Generation Cannon Fodder

Overall, the writing is really good, and there are no major problems so far. It's worth reading, and there are innovations in the article. However, I think it is a little inappropriate to list the realm divisions in a separate chapter at the beginning. Best of all... It would be nice to photoshop each chapter. After all... There are a lot of people who don't like to see this.

Let's evaluate it. The author has always emphasized that he is a novice. Indeed, the front is not very good. The main reason is that characters appear suddenly. It is very sudden, and some messy plots will suddenly pop up later. But one thing is certain. The author writes more and more smoothly. This is a good thing. I hope that Tomato will produce another excellent author.

The subject matter is new and the ideas are fresh. You can add a little emotional line appropriately, such as adding a fiancée or something. There are also multiple pairs of children of destiny to take action to add a bit of interest. If possible, get some that are reborn with only memories. Also, it is not necessary to kill every protagonist. If you have a good attitude and character, you can take them as subordinates or friends. I feel like this year and a half in the book is so slow. I like the end of the world. I don't know when I will see the protagonist start a plane war in the end of the world. I look forward to it [Love]

Because the prologue clearly explains some of the settings of this article, I like it very much. Although the writing style is a bit too white [face covering], I can continue to read it. I really like this kind of story about an invincible single female protagonist. It is a pity that the ending is too hasty because the data is not very good [crying]. Looking forward to the next one~

Um, how can I put it this way? This book gave me a very strange feeling. I always felt that something was missing, just like a dish tastes weird without a single seasoning. After all, the author, you also said that it is normal for a novice to miss something. Overall, it is pretty good.

It's a pity that it's too short. I want to watch a movie that is neither the protagonist nor the villain, but one that saves those who are suffering. Whether it's a villain, a pig's foot, or a female villain, as long as they are miserably cheated by heaven, just go and help them.

Come on, don't be lazy.

The author is great and the writing is very good, but I feel that the female protagonist has no sense of existence, and the male protagonist does not really care about her.

Today is the same as always

It's the first time I've seen a single heroine as a villain.