Marvel: I Am Uchiha Madara

The first-person perspective deducts one star, and the poor punctuation and sentence structure in the dialogue also deduct another star! The plot moves too fast and feels rushed, making it difficult to immerse oneself, so another star is deducted! Most importantly, the first-person perspective is just too uncomfortable 🤦

Others are writing novels, you're telling stories. It's been a long time since I've seen a fool writing a book in the first person. Other people would write a hundred chapters about a single event, but you've only written four chapters from Iron Man 1 to Avengers 1?! Are you kidding me?! This is just a rambling account; other people's essays have more depth than yours...

It's somewhat like a long essay.

I quite like it.

Is this someone writing a diary?

I hope you will continue to update this book in the future, and I also hope you will never give up on any book. Keep it up, author!

It's pretty good, I like it.

I really like it