Demon Slayer: After Becoming Kokushibo

It's so good, it would be great if there were dozens of chapters added at once, although that's not possible. Anyway, it looks great! ! Although I always hope that the brotherhood will turn sour, hehehe, so I wrote a fanfic myself, hehehe. ₍˄·͈༝·͈˄*₎◞ ̑̑

It's really good. I really like the CP of Shi Mou and Yuanyi.

To be honest, I have known about this article for a long time, but I have never read it (I was blown away). I tied it in one breath. The first impression was that it was very bland. It was not a very exciting article but surprisingly it kept me reading. The author's writing style is really good for a newcomer, but there are a lot of emoticons, which makes me feel a little bit out of touch. The character creation is very creative, but being too creative can lead to bugs in the outline. All in all, it's well written and worth a try.

It's very interesting. I just need to take Lin Feng offline. My patience has really reached its limit. If I don't let him go offline, I'm afraid I'll abandon the book. After all, there aren't many demon slayer novels that suit my taste [smile]

Although I feel that the character of Lin Feng is well created and fits the arrogant character of a time traveler, it feels inexplicably satisfying to write it to death. In addition, the writing is almost very good, and the subsequent plot is very smooth after the revision [laughs]

I feel that although this book is a bit more daily, it is also satisfying to resolve some of the regrets of some characters. After all, when watching anime, most of them are basically tragedies. And for the author's other systematic character "Lin Feng", no matter what the character is like, it is normal to have some disgust, and there are also people who like it. After all, no matter which character is good or bad and how I like it, it is really good for me, and it is also the author's excellence to create this disgusting character! (Personal opinion, please don't comment)

Like it very much! ! Hehe, seeing how hardworking the author is, I give you five stars.

After reading Chapter 160, the original characters are still interesting. Lin Feng appears inexplicably, but he is really a male character with bad points and bright points. In a sense, the author has written it quite successfully.

It's August, please update soon! [Crazy] Donkey, rest, slaughter, understand? [Laughing evilly] I think that things like the way of heaven should be the destiny in the dark, not the deus ex machina. For example, Komaji's transformation into a ghost was handled very well. There is no need for Lin Feng to exist. Chitong doesn't need a system, just be your top stringer. Whatever the system can do, the boss can also do. If the world line is to be closed, it can be written as Wumei happened to meet Tong Mo Suyu while shopping, and returned to the origin. There is no need for God to take action. Heaven just controls the coincidence of fate. This is best. [Thinking] Also, the protagonist has very little sense of presence! [Crying] I want to see Hei Shimo fight! ! Because I really wanted to watch the final battle but stopped here, I decided to try to write a few chapters myself! Fan creation is here! [Laughing evilly] Chapter 168 The decisive battle can be read in the story in the book circle! Chapter 169 is coming! 170 On the way!

The author's writing style is still a bit immature, but it's okay. The subject matter is novel and interesting. However, I really like the subject of multiple time travellers, but the author's previous writing is really good, so I gave it four stars. Overall, this novel is really good, highly recommended! ! Furthermore, I think the plot is a bit too daily-oriented. It could use some more passionate battles.