Bright Sword: I Somehow Went on a Rampage in Northwestern Shanxi

I have read too many sword-fighting books, and this is the first time I have read one with Zhang Damiao as the protagonist. Although there are some flaws, it is generally good. It can be seen that the author is probably a novice, so keep up the good work. It is recommended that the author consider more when writing. For example, Ding Wei and Li Yunlong can fight, but they are only suitable for generals who charge into battle. Ding Wei is a handsome man and will have higher achievements. Here Zhang Damiao replaces Ding Wei, and Ding Wei's further training in Yan'an will not stop. Then after graduation, he will not just be the commander of the new second regiment, but the deputy brigade level. In other words, the military division commander or deputy commander this time should be Ding Wei, so it would be better for the author to deal with the relationship here. As for the heroine, if the author can write it well, it is best to have one. Comrade Zhang Da Miao has been single for dozens of worlds [face covering] [face covering] It's too pitiful. No matter what her identity is, she must not be a vase (the author can refer to the fact that the leader of the team next door fights the female protagonist inspector in the elite, which is really a heroine). She must be Da Miao's supporting partner. Of course, I don't want to write it as if I didn't say it.

No matter how you write in the future, the protagonist must be like the protagonist. Just because you can think of independent development, I will give you five stars. Most of the people who have passed through it are just following Lao Li's butt and digging into the ditch. This is the only book that can think of independence. I am optimistic about you and come on.

This is the first book. It starts slowly in the first few chapters, but then it gradually gets better. Everyone's opinions are welcome [I understand]

Although there are many flaws, overall it is still good and very watchable. I strongly support "The World War II zone is Yan Laoxi's world, not Du or any chief."

It's super nice, let's do my homework [laughing]

Very nice, no exaggeration, Headquarters orders: 1. Don't mess up 2. Not blocked Go ahead and do it.

Not bad, keep writing.

I give you a full five-star review, and by the way: "give me updates"

It has a little taste I originally wanted to give it 5 stars, but I still left 1 star for the later chapters. I hope the author doesn't end it badly [Like]

It's a book that suits my taste, but the author is short and short.