The Far Shore of the Great Dao

Both the plot and the characters are pretty good, there's nothing wrong with it, it's very interesting to watch [laughs evilly]

No one, I feel like the writing is much better than the last one. I hope I can write more this time. The first one only has 300 chapters which is a bit short. It's only the first day. Come on? Update soon Review, it is different from the old-fashioned plot of being mocked and slapped in the face. There is no one who jumps out to make mindless taunts. There are many funny places and they do not follow common sense. The single heroine is my favorite. It is very interesting. There are more people visible to the naked eye. Come on, take your time! See how many hours you have been watching

It's so damn good-looking, I'm embarrassed. I haven't seen something this good for a long time. It's just too damn short. I hope it's a single girl.

Chasing Chasing [please update] This is one of the best fantasy books I have ever read. It has a rigorous plot, ups and downs, and a lot of laughs. The writing is beautiful and delicate, and the logic is clear. However, the author is too short [please update]

Good looking very good I hope it's a single heroine

It is a novel that suits my taste, and I give it five-star reviews. I hope that the novel will continue to be exciting and not too bad.

Tomato is a rare good book, don't be a eunuch!

Judging from the previous book, Tomato has rarely seen such a serious fantasy. Come on, the author, and wish this book can achieve better results. After reading it for so long, I still feel sorry for the second volume. Although the second volume does not have a heroine, readers have almost forgotten what the heroine looks like. It should be that the second volume basically does not write much about the heroine, including side descriptions, but if it can be done that although you are not there, there are traces of you everywhere. If I feel it, I shouldn't have finished the second volume in such a hurry. If I think about it carefully, there are still a lot of places that can be written in detail in the second volume. In fact, I only wrote about two of the eight holy places, and basically didn't write about the others, including the obvious villain of the second volume who should be Lin Yan. In fact, the author should also have a detailed description of the story, but unfortunately he has not written it.

So far, the plot logic is okay and the characters have their own characteristics. The biggest shortcoming is the logical contradiction in the definition of combat power in the training system. Also, I'm really annoyed by the mindless comments in the comment section, which are a bunch of pretentious comments. Fortunately, this has been completed, otherwise I would be afraid that the author would just stop updating. There are too many emotional scenes, and the feeling that the male and female protagonists are bound feels like watching a romance. From a romance point of view, the male protagonist is really not worthy of the female protagonist, and his qualifications depend on the Creation Pearl, which was given to him by the female protagonist; his character is good and bad, and he lets Bomb steal the belongings of his own people and betray his unfair treasure; the most important thing is that he has no substantive effect on the female protagonist, and only uses his mouth from the beginning to the end. On the other hand, the female protagonist has complete qualifications in all five elements, including first-class elixirs, formations, spells, etc.; To the male protagonist, the female protagonist is the male protagonist's thug, nanny, and pharmacist. In addition to killing the male protagonist at the beginning, she failed to kill him and was killed. Later, she gave medicine, resources, and training techniques, and even sacrificed her life to save the male protagonist several times. When the male protagonist and the female protagonist are together, they have to rely on the female protagonist for everything. It's really embarrassing to watch this emotional scene. The male protagonist just moves his mouth, and the female protagonist inexplicably falls in love with the male protagonist and starts to give. What's the difference between Gen Linyan and only his mouth? Originally, it was a male story, and there was no hope for romantic drama. The plot of the two of them alone would be more interesting, but the author insisted on tying the male and female protagonists together for a long time, which makes people unable to ignore it even if they want to. The most annoying aspect is that one is strong and the other is weak.

It is a really wonderful novel. It feels a bit like The Legend of the Condor Heroes in the early reading, and a bit like a perfect world in the later reading. The emotional description of the characters in the book is particularly good. The story develops at a very fast pace. It is a novel that requires some thinking. Overall, it is very interesting. I can give it a score of 9.5 Or above. It's not comparable to the kind of mindless cool writing.