Fox Spirit Matchmaker: I Use Breathing Techniques

Even though he is a new author and has a lot of bad points, it is actually quite good-looking. You can just read it as a normal novel. I used to like to read harems, but now I like to read single female protagonists. Later, I will post some ordinary daily articles. It is actually good to write more about this book. Don't be too demanding when piling up a new book, insisting on writing a powerful and shocking masterpiece. I hope that everyone's opinions in the comment area can be discussed together. If the author's writing is not good, we can point it out and analyze it carefully, and then the author can improve it. This is a normal direction in the comment area. What I don't like is that you make a few random comments and then don't say where the poisonous points are. Or just anyone, I think I have experience, and then I directly reject a book. When I was a novice, and after reading it for a long time, I felt that I was a veteran and was used to seeing the routines. I felt that I could tell what the routines were at a glance, and then I felt that this book was not good. Later, I slowly and seriously started reading a book, and actually found the book to be quite interesting and beautiful. Sometimes I am immature and will deny the books written by others in one sentence. Later, I read more, learn more, and communicate more. After reading a book carefully and criticizing it, you can point out what is wrong, and then the author will improve it and then it will gradually become like this. I just hope that everyone will regard the novel as a daily reading. This book is very good, five stars.

It's very nice, I hope it doesn't end badly.

I feel like I have a sadistic tendency.

A little bit of hair and a little drag

I accidentally discovered this good book and read it in one sitting. I felt very happy. But when did the author have a dog food scene between Hong Hong and the male protagonist [angry][angry][angry]

Good looking, good luck to the author

The emotional line can be written thinly, and it is best to arouse that kind of emotional fluctuation. The paragraph about Su Su and Hong Hong is probably not going to come true. I would like to warn other readers not to think too deeply about Su Su and Hong Hong. Come on, if you can't continue writing, find a way to finish it. If it doesn't work, it will be unfinished. Don't not know what you are writing until the later stage. I'd rather be broken into pieces than a complete piece of tile [send my heart] [send my heart] [send my heart]

As an author who strives to become a real MAN, I will definitely give you full marks and five-star praise; I will continue to work hard to become the leader of this book.

Well... I won't just give a five-star review. Well, the original Yuehong chapter is really well written, but why does the beginning of each section have "dream"? Does it have any special meaning? Or should I give him a shocking blow at the end?

It's okay, not bad, but the changes in the third young master are a bit big, aren't they?