How I, an Ugly Freak, Turned My Life Around

Keep up the good work, ＾0＾~, I like it very much, Don't give up, author. I really like the way the author defined the characters. I like the first plane very much. The second plane feels like it was forced. In addition, I read that the author said that it was impossible to string together the fragments. I think the author could write the fragments that come to mind each time on another software. In the end, a lot of them will definitely be deleted, but this This kind of help is quite good (I also have the same problem as the author, but my writing skills are worse than the author, and what I think and what I write are different. Then I also wrote the fragments that suddenly came to me on the diary software, and it felt pretty good), keep up the good work, write down if you have ideas, don't give up, let's work together

Maybe it's because I have a problem with my IQ and I can't quite understand what kind of story the author wants to tell. The foreshadowing in front of it also feels strange. But the writing style is okay, it doesn't make people feel uncomfortable, and it's quite comfortable to read.

How to describe it? It's not that I'm attracted and want to read it, but I feel like I'm being seduced and keep reading. My mind is very confused but I think it's well written. Maybe it's because there are too many emotional descriptions in these chapters. I feel that it's not Tang Deng who was deceived by the heroine, but me (no)

Looks good, but too little The subject matter is novel and the characters are vivid. This is definitely not the author's first time writing. It would be nice if there was no cp. I don't know who the cp was in the end.

I think it's super pretty! Have your own style! !