Uncle Jiu, Help! I Choose to Open an Inner World

When will Mr. Ren come out? Neat, really neat.

The subject matter of this book is good, but I don't know whether the author lacks writing skills or is impatient. The plot descriptions in the previous chapters are too fast, and the twists are too stiff. It gives people a bit of a jumping feeling, but the sense of involvement is not strong. There will be progress in subsequent chapters, and I hope the author will continue to make progress. Give us great stories. Another suggestion is not to give too many good things in the early stage, otherwise the rewards will be sky-high in the later stage. The innate spiritual roots are enough, what should I do later? Go directly to the Chaos Spiritual Root? So is the magic weapon. In the same way, there can't be too many good varieties of monsters, and there are almost enough of them now. At most 5 mythical beasts can be gathered together. No matter how many there are, readers will have trouble remembering them, and the number of appearances will not be allocated. Will be forgotten by readers. It would be very abrupt to write it out of the blue. Furthermore, the speed of refining alchemy is too fast. Making 10,000 Transformation Pills in one night is too dramatic, since the protagonist is not at a high level after all. Same as magic weapon The best solution is to set up a Buddhist Scripture Pavilion and teach disciples how to make elixirs and weapons. Anyway, there is an inner heaven and earth, so if you just get an initiation, all of them will be instant masters of alchemy and weapon refining. There is also too little description of the inner world, and the theme of the title of the book is not touched upon. It feels like it's just an overdone thing. It's not as popular as a plug-in. The most important thing is that it's not even displayed on the data package.

The book is quite good, but the update speed is not good enough. It took ten and a half days to raise the book, but it disappeared in a few seconds [face covering]

It's pretty good, come on

Goldfinger is so powerful, why should I worship Uncle Nine?

Like it very much, good quality

Oh oh oh oh oh oh oh oh oh oh oh oh oh oh oh oh oh oh oh oh oh oh oh oh oh oh oh oh oh oh oh oh oh oh oh oh oh oh oh oh oh oh oh oh oh oh oh oh oh

It's well written, but it develops too fast.

It looks good. The apprentice is so rich but the master is so poor. His net worth is worse than that of a spiritual beast.

It tastes a bit Jiji