The Immortal Food of Mankind

I will evaluate it myself. I hope you all like it! _(:з∠)_ This is the second fairy tale novel after "No Way to Immortal Road". I hope everyone will support it! _(•̀ω•́ ∠)_

The subject matter is very suitable for my taste, but the protagonist is too pressed for time. It seems like he is holding his breath without taking a breath. It feels too tired to take it in. Please relax a little! I'm really worried that the final outcome will be: the protagonist becomes invincible, takes this breath away, and then dies [laughing and crying]

This book is really well written. The protagonist is decisive and will not make meaningless sacrifices. I think even if the protagonist does not have a golden finger, he can still go a long way. The protagonist really strategizes and operates behind the scenes and follows a different path. Only with such a character can he be successful. Unlike those brainless male protagonists who rely on halo and inexplicable charm, come on, author.

It is a perfect combination of cultivating immortality and weirdness. It is compact, not procrastinating and not too complicated. The training system is novel and there is no logical confusion. In summary, Golden Finger is a supercomputer (deduction) + energy furnace (extraction and refining). Support, support, support~ Come on, update! There are also some wizard systems, such as the rune structure in the body

This novel is so awesome. I have only seen more than 40 pictures and I can't help but give it a good review. Probably this part of the male protagonist has started the first big copy. The characters involved subverted my imagination. This reversal is so interesting. In addition, his skills should be more original and relatively new. I recommend it. The theme of cultivating immortals is really good. The main plot is that the male protagonist hides himself as a transparent person in the game between the two parties, breaks the villain's game in advance and reports it to the positive party to slow down the speed of the world's destruction, while taking advantage of the chaos to gain some benefits, and then slowly reaches out to the evil god in the sky. It's just that the layout relies entirely on cheats, and it's not good for the male protagonist to become a collector of tools (he also opened a bunch of sub-plug-ins that low-level practitioners can counter-detect and spy on high-level practitioners without being discovered), which invisibly reduces the charm of the male protagonist. After all, the source of the charm of the protagonist behind the scenes is strategizing, not relying on systematic reasoning. It depends on how things come back later. I have only read more than a hundred chapters so far. In addition, there are some areas that can be improved: Because it is a genre, I will spend a lot of words on flesh and blood and mental fear, but there are many repetitions of blood, blood, legs, many legs, flesh balls, many eyes of flesh balls, or fear, extreme fear. Sometimes it is so exaggerated that three blood and two fears can appear in one sentence, which will really cause aesthetic fatigue. You can expand your line library and try more different ancient words. For example, don't wait for another hour, there is still one-fifth of the essence and blood, and there are still thousands of miles that have not caught insects in some places (in the early stage), let's change to something else. Like the dancing goddess, I feel that the flesh-and-blood super moves unleashed by the bloody skeleton throughout the story are not charming enough. This villainess also needs to be more beautiful. She changed it to a red and pink skull, and the pink smoke balls (actually densely packed with small bugs) all the monsters under her command corrupted into mud and turned into strange things. The aroma (of the drunken bugs) gathered towards her and turned into an illusory gauze wrapped around the skeleton to form a vaguely beautiful face (if you look closely, it is still a bug, a bug with a dead face). Wouldn't it be more consistent with the style of this evil god than directly writing about bugs exploding their heads? In addition, the names and contents of the exercises created by the author (probably original) are great, and the skills are very high and not embarrassing. It feels like he has put in the effort to check the information, and it has a Taoist feel. But the lines that use allusions are really embarrassing (many people also reacted to the comments). For example, there is a mental brainwashing control in the skill, and the name is "The right path in the world is the vicissitudes of life." It's really embarrassing, really. This sentence has been used by men who pretend to be literary and artistic on the Internet. Can you change it to a less popular one? I originally thought that the author was trying to test his publicity, but there was really a hint of red, but the words at the end inspired the Dragon King to say "All kinds of frost and sky compete for freedom", and the author repeatedly hit the mark. In addition, the Dragon King questioned that he does not treat all things equally (he refuses to eat humans). The protagonist's defense of "I am a human being, and being a human being is my anchor, etc." Is actually very unsatisfactory. It is really embarrassing to insist on borrowing classics for the sake of literature. The author needs to work harder on arranging words and sentences. Third update: four stars It didn't work anymore, there were a lot of forced intelligence and the male protagonist's OOC situation. I couldn't accept this kind of high start and low end, so I gave up. For example, in the part about reducing intelligence: In order to achieve the purpose of saying that the male protagonist successfully escaped without being discovered, a sentence was inserted into the situation where it was obvious that he would be discovered by the supporting characters with high IQs, but no one discovered it. He even wrote to be wary and was monitoring his power, but he let him go without mentioning the follow-up (Master) The cheating problem that is not very logical is still there, and the system directly provides it. "Encyclopedia of Magic in the World" 3000 spells "Encyclopedia of formations in the world" 365 formations "Encyclopedia of Alchemy in the World" 3000 Alchemy Methods "Encyclopedia of Talisman in the World" 3000 Talismans "Encyclopedia of Artifact Making in the World" 3000 Magical Artifacts There are hundreds of miscellaneous subjects in "The Encyclopedia of Miscellaneous Studies in the World". What kind of avatar does the male protagonist have in the back? And the puppet's speaking skills are directly taken from it. This is a joke. In addition, the male protagonist used a little trick in the foundation-building stage to steal books from a university and hide it from those with much higher cultivation levels. He could also plant spies all over the city and repeatedly jump in front of the small boss. Those who didn't know it thought the boss was a puppet. Including those descriptive words that are repeated a lot, I picked a little Three countless: her lower body turned into a snake tail covered with countless scales, and her upper body became an armor covered with countless white bones, and there were countless weird eyes growing on the armor. Repeating numbers (there are also a large number of multiples that are different from other techniques in order to make the male protagonist particularly strong, not 108 but three thousand, such as the Taoist technique above): Doomsday fog is extraordinary: within the scope of the fog, the power of all spells and magic weapons is weakened ten times, and the consumption is increased ten times. Two horrors in one sentence: Some seemed to be some kind of extremely terrifying and huge images. Although it was just a vague message, it could still make him feel infinite terror. A three-sentence horror sentence: I don't know when a huge face appeared in the sky, a terrifying and twisted face like a demon. Countless terrifying tentacle-like fluff covered the face. A huge black palm protruded from the face and fell quickly with infinite terrifying power. In addition, the character of the male protagonist has also changed, not in a good way. There is neither divinity nor humanity. While ignoring human life, he has no regrets for the lives involved. On the one hand, he is jealous that the NPC he is taking advantage of has a confidante, and he dislikes the fact that the spy he arranged is Lord Rabbit. He is not very worthy of his status as a plug-in and a wise man. Later, when I read Duan Ping, I realized that this author was working on three novels at the same time. Plus, this one was publishing 4 novels a day. It was completely a business flow novel, so there was nothing I could do about the decline in quality. Don't have too high expectations for this novel at the beginning. It will be very good. I just had too high expectations at the beginning and read it as the second mystery book. Now I can't stand it anymore.

It's nice. I like this kind of slimy and smart pig's feet, but they're so short [face covering]

Yes, it's a very good book. The setting is a bit similar to Mo Dao's The Lord of Ten Thousand Nights, but there are differences. It's a very novel fantasy world view. This kind of fantasy with a little bit of restraint is really addictive. The writing is good and the logic is clear, but there are too few of them nowadays [Love][Love][Love]

This book talks about the leakage of essence from the human body of ordinary people. Practitioners can use it to practice. If they do something wrong, they will be polluted into monsters. Generally speaking, it is similar to incense becoming a god. Incense is the power of faith in the world. Both essence and incense contain the seven emotions of human beings. The six desires can be said to be very poisonous. In the Fengshen worldview, Taoist ancestors said that there is a great road of merit and virtue in the West and eight hundred side doors. Incense or the essence of magazines are among the eight hundred side doors. Of course, this is just a superficial opinion based on my reading of many novels. If you don't like it, don't comment.

Kru Xiuxian, not only is he alone in this world, but he is at least one of the few. It would be nice to have some fireworks to spice things up! Awesome, keep up the good work! [Smile][smile] It's getting more and more exciting, with more story lines and plots,

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