Naruto: Crafting My Own Dojutsu Cheat

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The writing is good, but be careful not to get too hung up on the various settings. The most important thing about online writing is that it is enjoyable, and the second is updates. The plot is smooth and exciting, and if there are enough updates, it will definitely become popular. Whether it will be a small hit or a big hit depends on luck.

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The writing is good, but I don't think Uchiha Itachi is innocent. No matter how much he hopes for peace, he even killed his parents and clan members for the sake of the village and surrendered. This kind of thing only happens in small Japan. An ungrateful white-eyed wolf.

The protagonist's eyes are so powerful that they can rewrite reality and are destined to be invincible. If they can forcibly fuse with White Zetsu, they can also rewrite the bloodlines of other kaleidoscopes to merge with themselves. Immortal body plus immortal eyes, you are directly invincible

After reading dozens of chapters, the author really likes Uchiha Itachi. The Uchiha Itachi has begun to exterminate the clan and has killed some of the Uchiha clan members. The protagonist catches Uchiha Itachi and refuses to kill him. He still has to persuade him with his words. It is simply ridiculous.

I came across this book a few days ago and read that it was pretty good. But when it came to the idea of the protagonist being behind the scenes, I quit. I gave it 5 stars before I quit, because behind the scenes is really not my cup of tea. I saw it again on the book list today. I thought about it and came in to take a look. Damn it, Whitewashed Weasel. Five stars and two stars for you. I really don't understand why so many people like this white-eyed wolf. Even with the education we have, it's impossible for most people to like him. In this Naruto story, 70% of them are whitewashed. If I see one, I'll give it two points.

You killed a member of your own clan, and the clansman forgave you on the spot. She was still his wife, 6. This is too amazing, right?

Anyway, I don't think it's a good idea to clean up Uchiha's white-eyed wolf.

The imagination is okay, the setting is novel, the plot is protracted, there are too many inner dramas, and there are too few exciting points of strength development and it can be passed through in one step. The ability of Kaleidoscope is very good, but the use of divine power to fuse cells, it feels like there is no fighting. Looking at it alone, I thought it was the awakening of divine power, and it was whitewashed. Uchiha Itachi, I need to understand the outline, but he is a bit too tough (part of me likes his genius kaleidoscope and inner crow. Most people in the country think that he is a white-eyed wolf. The extraordinary world just knows that you don't need it, or you have calculated that you are a bit too Naruto for forcing the whitewash), Add to this the persuasion of the clan leader, the persuasion of Itachi, the persuasion of the clan members. Even if you say that you have strength, you still don't feel it. But you keep talking about being behind the scenes and being a thug. It feels very conflicting. When you break into the behind the scenes, your own strength is not safe. Since you want to fight, you have to develop. Now that you have grown up, you have to feel good. After all, watching behind the scenes is just for you to make various arrangements behind the scenes. When you are strong enough, you will naturally feel good (refer to Aizen). Just like the red next door, I tolerated this and that in the early stage, wasn't it just to overturn the chessboard and redefine my rules? To put it bluntly, it's less exciting. The chapter descriptions feel more frustrating than the useless ones. It's really uncomfortable to be so frustrated when you have the strength. After all, you started with Awakening Kaleidoscope and your ability is not bad (ne). It should be half a cool article and half a behind-the-scenes story. The cool writing is not as exciting as the behind-the-scenes. Introduction is the main reason why I felt depressed and uncomfortable after reading it.