Martin’s Journey Through Dimensions

I just read clannad recently, so I wanted to read the fanfic. I felt that Nagisa was a bit abrupt, and there were some conflicts between the words and the characters, and the image of Furukawa and his wife were a little different from what I thought. But I think this book is still good. The only uncomfortable thing is that Anri accepted Martin having two girlfriends so quickly, come on!

How can I say it's very good? The author's writing is also very good, but I feel a little aggrieved. I don't know why your world is much more difficult than reality, and the characters are very similar to reality, but I just feel a little aggrieved. I thought you would break the rules of this world with the strength of Niu 13. Well, because you wrote about the power of being able to travel through many worlds and think it would be very harmful. If you were writing about some abilities, I might give it 5 stars, but your writing style would be better to write about the feeling of mysterious recovery. The emotional drama I have seen ranks among the top ten. Overall, it's very cool and awesome, but it doesn't suit my taste. I prefer the 1/3 invincible flow. I don't have to be afraid of many things. Anyway, I don't have to be afraid. I feel that if you are very careful, it will be better if you choose monsters and light. Tell me why you feel wronged. For example, A is a level 30 person who does all kinds of evil. No one comes to trouble A. B is level 30, but he is kind-hearted and willing to help others, but he feels that the world is against him. B is level 30, there will be level 40 looking for trouble. B. Level 50, there will be level 60 looking for trouble. A=bad. B=protagonist I didn't find that the bad guys were only at level 30 and did all sorts of bad things without anyone to care about them, but the protagonist was at level 30 but more advanced looking for trouble, so I felt a little aggrieved. Sorry, I'm in 4th grade. If I can't see it tomorrow, I'll pretend I didn't see it. Forget it, give it 5 stars.

It's been a long time since I saw a Clannad fan, come on

Give me a five-star support, support, support. The main reason is that there are too few people who can write cl. How should I put it? It feels like the author has let himself go, the characters are all OOC, and the writing style is indeed not very good. But still support it

This is the first time I've seen a novel about time travel by Tomato and I hope to include all the female protagonists. Come on, author!

The author writes well

Thank you for your 5-star review. And the author, you haven't updated for 17 hours. Even the production team doesn't take such a rest.

The author writes very well, but can he write less NPC dialogue?

Since I haven't watched Unreal Warrior, it shouldn't have any impact if I don't watch that part, right?

It's been a long time since I've seen an old drama novel!