Demon Slayer: I Draw the Dongfang Yao Template

It must be finished! This book is really good, but I'm just a student, so I can only give a small thumbs up (ps: Can I include Kanae too?)

The rating of 7.5 Is, to be honest, low. This book shows the author's hard work. Although there are indeed problems, the flaws cannot be concealed. I suggest the author think more in new ways. It is obvious that there are many plots with almost the same treatment. However, since this is the author's first book, I think it is well written, [laughing] The character of the protagonist is somewhat emotional and very real. Except sometimes it is obvious that he didn't want to write about Long Aotian but the plot was unexpectedly revealed. There are indeed cases where he didn't grasp the plot well and found out that it was sent without plotting for the protagonist. This is a common problem in fan fiction. After all, the characters in it are not imagined by oneself, and there will be situations where the plot is not under one's control. I can only say that the author believes in himself and writes original works. You can do it!

Can you finish it? I feel good about it personally.

It's very interesting, but a little lacking. Come on, author💪, support [laughs]

I searched all over the Internet for fans who wrote about Senior Sister, and found two One of them is Fei Lu, and the other one is this. After reading Chapter 49, I found that the author actually has the same goals as me. 1. Content 1. It's not a brainless or invincible flow. 2. There are not too many elements that are messy. 3. The rhythm of the article is very accurate, and the boy's growth and emotional development are gradual. 4. The number of chapters and words is just right. There is no water or eunuchs. 2. Character aspect 1. There is no harem and no vase heroine. 2. The characters' IQs are all online 3. Plot aspect 1. I didn't deliberately follow the route of the original work. After all, many bookworms were tired of reading it. I designed a lot of original stories, which are quite interesting. I think I didn't want the plot to develop too fast, but at the same time, I wanted to keep the content novel. Overall, I think this is the best book (personal opinion). After all, I like Masaki the most. As you can see from the avatar, I am not interested in Butterfly Ninja and Kanroji Mitsuri at all. Yadouzi is better. . . This is a masterpiece, and ratings don't represent everything! The first time Zhen Xiang appeared, he was so cute😍 You may not believe it, but I have been looking for a novel with the heroine Masaki for a long time, and I have always been disappointed, so I also wanted to write one. . . Until I found this book, the plot concept actually overlapped 80% with the author's (of course I don't play King of Kings), but for study reasons, I didn't start. This book felt like it was written just for me. Haha, he can't be my soulmate, right? I'm looking forward to hearing the readers' thoughts next time the author opens a new pit. Maybe there will be some new ideas😚

Although I didn't live in Demon Slayer: Kimetsu no Yaiba in the end, it was much better than the Demon Slayer: Kimetsu no Yaiba I read. There were several times when I saw the sword, especially when Tianyi's master committed seppuku, and I always felt like crying. This book was also the book that I slowly read from the first chapter to the last chapter. It was also a book that stayed with me for three months. I don't know why I can't explain the feeling [almost crying] forget it. I wish the author to find a good wife like Tianyi.

It's good, but sometimes it's quite embarrassing.

It's good. The character creation is a bit overdone. After all, it's a fighting show. It's like a campus love story. Since it's a single heroine, it's better to be in her own home. It's true that she has no home. The Butterfly Ninja is also a bit too naughty. Although the protagonist's personality dictates it, it feels like it lacks the "elegance" of a strong person. You need to work harder in terms of fighting.

I think it's okay, but I don't know why I got such a low score.

It's really beautiful. Why is it rated so low? I didn't dance at all