Genshin Impact: The Reborn Ying and Me, a Transmigrator

Great writing, why are there so few people?

There are only 38 np pictures and more than 100,000 words, and the entire plot of this book is currently very well written in various aspects. This can be regarded as a masterpiece of Genshin Impact fan work, but it has not been developed yet. If it is developed, we... Will be witnesses of this book!

After reading the whole thing, it's okay. My evaluation of this work is that there is too much suspense and the story is too short. In other words, the main plot is too tight. The story is too short and not enough to describe the suspense part. There is too little buffer time. Add some short stories and small daily routines. To summarize the problem of the small number of people, the first few articles cannot retain people. The protagonist in the previous words is too out of touch, or does not understand or is arrogant. This is the reason why few people read this work. The first reason is that the emotional drama of the characters. To be honest, most of them are skipped. As long as the reason can't stand the embarrassment and there is something strange to say, the third reason is that you must consider the rationality. If you are too extravagant, the readers will not understand or be embarrassed. I am not saying that you can't be a little extravagant and be weird, but some things must be grasped to a certain degree. Once this degree is exceeded, it will affect the readers to continue reading, leading to various reasons not to want to read the work. I personally think this work is very good and has great potential, but you seem to have written it a little too hastily. My review ends here, I may add some more in the future. Oh, I forgot to mention, there is also shame.

It's well written, but I'm afraid of the crazy backstabbing from the authorities.

Author, I don't care about anything else. You can do it with a small knife at the end. I can tolerate being hit by a knife. I can also tolerate a big knife. As long as you give the hero and the screenwriter a good ending, we will still be good friends. Otherwise, don't let me know where your home is. Also, when sleeping at night, it is best to turn your left eye and right eye. Is it my misunderstanding? Why do I feel that the progress is so fast? Xumi only needs a few pictures and then goes straight into the abyss. Author, 200 pictures are too much for you to write. Let's write about daily life. The water reaches 300.

Damn it, can those who leave comments see behind? What's behind is the real excitement. Although Luo Ling in the front is really a bit cheap, you will find Luo Ling's noble character in the back (I can't reveal the plot in the back (can't think of any words to describe him), he wanders repeatedly between cheapness and holiness). Being a tomato bookworm for six years, you have to be patient when reading. The more you read the back of this book, the more exciting it becomes. I guess most of the front is foreshadowing, so you must see the back.

Very good, it is currently speculated that there is a knife at the end.

The writing is very good. I feel that the story is very novel and interesting. I hope the author will not give up on the book and work hard to finish it. I will always support you.

What does this book say? I cried at the beginning of reading, and I really cried. When the protagonist made a sacrifice, I thought it was over, but at the end, the protagonist came back to life again, and made me laugh again. It was not ridicule, but pure happiness. Thank you to the author. This book is also the reason why I fell in love with Genshin Impact. I like this book very much. I hope there will be more sweet love with Ying Tian in the future, but it is a pity that it is over😭

Although the early stage was not very good, the later stage deeply touched my heart ❤️. The explanation in the later stage was also very good. Even though I also hope that the protagonist can have his own body and meet the Yingmei (I haven't seen the back, I don't know). Luo Ling may be a bit too much in the front, but as a time traveler, he will definitely have fantasy. The latter highlights the sense of responsibility. Although it is still not serious, at least he has fulfilled his responsibility.