Genshin Impact: Aether Dug Up My Grave in Tears

The author slashes the reader with a sword in his hand. There are more than a dozen lines on the page, sneak attacks, critical strikes and soul damage. The reader is heartbroken. The author sees the heartache and gives another candy. The reader sees the candy and urges the readers to keep up.

The writing is very delicate, I can't stop reading it, yes [shy]

This was the first and only book I read over and over again! The sword named "Secret Love" is really, really sweet (//∇//), but that kind of sweetness has a knife in it, and the knife has a sweetness in it. The author has grasped the degree of relaxation, which is very real! If you weren't a prisoner, this would definitely be a Genshin Impact fanfic that would be better than the Nine Reincarnations! (At least that's what I think in my heart. I've also watched Nine Worlds of Reincarnation) In my heart, he is the MVP of Genshin Impact fanfics! You can tell by looking at my reading time. Although it is a bit short, you can also tell that I have read it many times.

I will actually rate the 5th movie in my lifetime... Congratulations to Coca-Cola. The reason for my rating, please see below. I admit that this work is excellent. If it keeps up, it will undoubtedly become a masterpiece. The writing is very delicate when describing emotions, but when describing in detail, the description of the soul can be appropriately reduced, focusing on expressions and environment. In this way, readers will have a richer imagination of emotions, and the knife will be deeper. There is also the depiction of beautiful things, superimposing the beauty layer by layer, and then cutting it down. It is certainly good. , But false acting and personality are also unavoidable. The fictitiousness in it is the breakthrough point of emotion. The word fictitious is very strange. The two words together become the erratic "fake". This comes from the readers' yearning for beauty. Even if they know it is false, they still have hope in their hearts that there is truth in it (I hope Ling Lin's false feelings can be verified as fictitious?). It is also a good choice to start in this aspect. Another part is that beauty cannot only be written about one aspect, warmth, love, family, friendship... Etc. Are all breakthroughs. Each aspect cannot be described too much. The right amount of description will make the depth of the knife deeper, and let redemption, despair, and grief appear in Sora's eyes in turn. This is the meaning of describing beauty. When he reaches the end of the journey, there is no redemption in his heart, so Paimon, who has always been by his side and given him warmth, but he did not care too much, is the final catalyst. (The character of Paimon needs more description to become the final catalyst) This is my advice from a former writer. After all, I used to write specifically about swords, so I still have some experience, but because it happened a long time ago, it may be a bit cliché. You don't need to listen to my advice, because I just finished reading the book and I haven't tasted the book clearly yet. I'll give you some suggestions, but not much. Just read it. From a reader's point of view, I really hope that you can hit me. After reading this whole book, I found that you are the only author in my library who can possibly hit me, so I will feel very happy, because it has been about 23 years. No book can hit me. To put it bluntly, I am completely immune to the big knife you are eating. So when I discovered this book of yours, I desperately hoped that you would kill me. From the perspective of the role played by my account: an old monster who transcends the age of the universe and has done experiments like yours hundreds of times. Those people are either crazy or have become puppets. At the moment when beauty breaks down, no matter how absurd the language is, with a little guidance, he can obey your orders and let him figure it out and become a madman. But the situation here seems to be slightly different, so I am very interested in your final result. Phew, the above is my evaluation. I hope this masterpiece can become a masterpiece.

The author really wrote into my heart, Aoi's love for Sora, Kube Aoi's tenderness moved me, the rumors, suspicions, concealments, lies, misunderstandings, evasion to the final sacrifice between the two really touched my heart hard! Aoi! ! ! ! [I'm about to cry][I'm about to cry][I'm about to cry] (Couples who really want to grow old together should be alert! If the misunderstanding is not resolved, they will eventually part ways [strike])

Although the plot is very cliché, it's inexplicably enjoyable to watch. Maybe it's because there are very few such themes. So I hope the author of The Harder the Knife can not limit himself to a gentle personality and can occasionally insert some other personalities.

(Contains slight spoilers) I was dumbfounded. The author used delicate writing to construct the character "Aoi". As an independent and protagonist's own thoughts, Aoi's love for Sora is obvious to all, from "an elf girl who is easily shy" to "a cute person who brings joy to people around her". The struggle and embarrassment in the hospital bed at the end of "Love Girl", and the boldness towards Sora when parting (what struck me the most were not only the words "My love for you is real", but also the action of calling Sora at the door when he knew he was about to leave) The image is very strong, of course this is an advantage, The most important thing in a work is to find shortcomings and correct them. Personal opinion: When he knew that Aoi's time was running out, Kaiya's reaction was too abrupt. Diluc had the foreshadowing at the winery, "Diluc seemed to be touched by the innocence of the girl." Qin can also be the image of Aoi and Qin. It's a pity that the heroines of the novel overlap perfectly in the imagination (the interaction between Qin and Barbara is awesome), but the main interaction between Kaiya and Aoi is Kaiya's joke and being refuted by Aoi, but after knowing this information, such a big reaction is too abrupt. Overall, this book is great, go read it! (Author, you are so short, you update these basic modo modo every day) Wait a minute, I just read other people's comments, Σ(°Д°; Is the author a boy!?!? (Super shocked) Is such a delicate writing style a boy!?

You're so good at writing, don't write it next time [crying] [crying] It's really too sweet. . I feel sorry for Brother Kong for a second. . .

Although it is a knife, it is also very sweet. According to what I have read so far, it is more sweet than a knife, but it is the kind of one that directly breaks the defense with one knife. There is also a gradual process in the middle. Although the overall plot of the article is a bit old-fashioned, it still has a unique flavor if you read it carefully. The author's description of the characters is just right. Every change in the character's personality can be seen from the plot. The control of events is also good. All in all, it is a high-quality novel that you can read at night. (Of course, I hope the author doesn't overdo it or end it badly)

To be honest, I was very moved when I listened to this song in the early stage. I strongly recommend [Say Yes To Heaven x Shootout] to give it a try.