I Transmigrated into a Household-Intrigue Novel to Cultivate Immortality

I really like the story about cultivating immortality that starts from a mortal. The heroine goes through the book and counterattacks from cannon fodder, becoming stronger step by step. The male protagonist is a gentle and kind-hearted young man, and he is also shy. I like it so much. I give it to you for the first time to give you a five-star review.

This is the first time I insist on following the update. It is really good to watch. The heroine will not follow the plot of the novel specially. She will be obedient at first and secretly cultivate immortality by the way. In the early stage, the child would have been lost due to the original plot, but in the end the heroine had no choice but to take it upon herself, and also saved the person who was suspected of harming the child. Then she escaped immediately without any delay, and the heroine even used spiritual stones in exchange for money to buy a house! She is really a very smart heroine who knows exactly what she needs. At the same time, he also truly stepped into the path of cultivating immortality, which was a good opportunity and turning point. Break through the shackles of novels and see a different perspective It's pretty good-looking, at least it must be around eight o'clock! Why is it only after six o'clock? So weird... Sad

I found a little bit that didn't make sense. The heroine is a maid, so what kind of identity did she use to buy the house? Doesn't the government need to transfer the household registration and then cover it? If she was using her base name, shouldn't the prince find out? And what exactly did she leave behind in the palace? Is her spirit stone in the storage bag or in the palace? Because later he seemed to say that there was nothing in her storage bag. And then isn't she wanted now? So what should he do if he goes out? Is he supposed to put on that invisibility charm every time?

I'm still a little bit unsatisfied after reading the whole book. The subject matter is really novel and to my liking. From the beginning to the end, everything is great. I'm looking forward to the author's next book. It would be even better if he continues to write this book [I'm about to cry]

I like this book very much. It may be a little controversial at the beginning, but it becomes more exciting as you go to the end! ! ! Hehe, the male protagonist is really Xiaoye, so happy! !

It's so exciting, every character in the story is very vivid. Come on, author! ! ! (◍•ᴗ•◍)❤

This is a shortcoming when you learn to cultivate immortality, but the others are pretty good.

In fact, the author's writing style is quite good, and the storyline is also out of the ordinary. The score is a bit low, maybe because the author's subjective level is a bit low. After all, the great masters in the fairy tales always bend the knee for the mortal royal family, which is a bit embarrassing.

I feel like the rating shouldn't be so low. This is my first time writing a book review. Trying to save the score! Most of the problems frequently mentioned in the comment area do exist, but after reading through, you can see that the author has carefully designed the trajectory of each character. Some of the more intense voices only appear because they are brought into the book by the text, so the author is great. I clicked on the author column and found that this is the first book of Dada. With such quality, it is already amazing! It really hurts me to see someone say in the middle that they don't dare to read comments because of some things! (I hope this article can be seen one day! This book is on the home page!) Ahem, I'm getting further and further away... The setting in the book is obviously refreshing among the army of time travel literature. Although some of the heroine's words and deeds have been criticized, they are still imperfect and appear to be more frank. There is room for improvement in the scenes and some rhythm and plot processing, but it does not affect the development of the plot. For example, Xiaoye's initial refusal to leave and later on the cliff There could be more writing on the recovery of the temperament at the end. Although the Peach Blossom Forest at the end is meant to leave a blank space for everyone to daydream about, the emotional details in the early stage are too few and are not highlighted in place. The final impression will become "Why is it over like this?"... There are still some feelings that are difficult to accept, but in short, I really like this book. It has saved the book shortage, and I am very grateful!

Overall, this book is quite good. The author is great, could you fill in the blanks that you missed? It would be easy for people to not understand it! For example, the heroine and a few people go up the mountain in a group, and she is just a maid...