Are You Kidding? You Can Still Order Takeout at the End of the World?

Here are a few sincere suggestions from the author: 1. The subject matter of food delivery is actually quite good, but you've ruined it. I suggest revising it starting from the first chapter. 2. The fact that you have to pay even in the apocalypse makes readers think you're stupid, or that you're treating your readers like fools. 3. The food delivery process needs to have some interesting elements, such as time travel or something similar. It needs to be unique to be interesting. 4. A novel needs to focus on becoming stronger as the main plot, developing power as a secondary plot, and interspersed with other romantic storylines; otherwise, no one will read it. 5. Getting a tablet is like having a cheat code, that's fine, but the delivery driver must be the main focus. If others treat the delivery driver as a tool, the protagonist becomes just a tool, who wants to watch that? 6. The wording and dialogue need improvement, and the pacing of the plot needs to be sped up. The delivery guy is already incredibly skilled; he should just kill anyone he doesn't like, otherwise where's the thrill?

The system assigns orders, but the protagonist has to find the vegetables himself. The protagonist actually gives money to zombies! The protagonist is making phone calls to buy a house in the apocalypse! During the apocalypse, the protagonist calls someone who sold houses before the apocalypse, resulting in the death of a girl who was hiding from zombies. I want to ask, in the apocalypse, do you still need to buy a house? The protagonist deserves to be criticized.

Paying for things in the apocalypse? What the hell are you thinking?