After Winning Over the Boss, the Server's Top Player Disappears

Overall, it's very good. The pace is a little too fast. For example, the heroine promised to go back to Novice Village to visit the villagers, but the article only mentions returning to Novice Village once. It's because of the male protagonist. Another example is that the heroine clearly accepted the task to promote embroidery, but did not say whether the follow-up was completed. And what about Master Li, who is very good at stealing? Where's the rainbow? Wait, there are still some small details about the supporting characters that I haven't paid attention to, such as how the supporting characters ended up, and did Hu Tiantian and Lin Zhi finally reconcile? Wait, but overall it's still great. It looks very refreshing and not boring. I also hope that the author can write a follow-up when he is older, about whether the heroine has fulfilled her role as a martial arts leader, the establishment and development of the gang, etc. However, these unexplained small details can also be understood as an open ending, allowing readers to guess by themselves, which is also good. (No criticism, just some small suggestions. If the author doesn't like it, you don't have to read it, or maybe what I understand is different from what the author wants to express [sending my heart]) In the end, overall it's great! Love this book!

Super pretty! ! The content is wonderful, I really like the female lead and the male lead! ! The heroine's penis is a bit big! ! Don't get tired of watching it! Suitable for my taste! It would be great if this game world was a real world. Support the author greatly [like] [ask for more updates] [please ask for more updates]

Not bad, the interaction between the male and female protagonists is also very sweet, but it ends too quickly, there is very little content in the game, and some things are not followed up (for example, the establishment of a trade union in the game, the leader of the martial arts league, etc.) I hope there will be a side story [blowing kiss]

It's very interesting, but the ending is a bit wrong, and it disappeared so quickly. When I saw the full text of "Hundred Poems of Inseparability", the author is great, do you know? ! My heart hurts so much! My little heart couldn't bear it. I thought it was because it hadn't been updated, but it turned out that the whole article was finished. But it's really pretty [like]

Fortunately, I just felt that some unimportant things were detailed, and the ending felt like I was too rushed to write it out.

Highly recommended, very beautiful, no loss in investment! The whole plot is very good. I really love the heroine. This character is really unique to the Tomato heroine. What I like most is like a little sun, positive, kind and gentle, guiding confused people and leading them to the right path. But it's really not enough! I also want to see Jiuge's school life after that, I want to see them get married in the real world, I want to see their married life, I want to see them give birth to children, wow, the author is great, can you add some extras? [Shy]

Looking at the introduction, I thought it was my favorite holographic online game. Who knew that the online game should be just a foreshadowing in terms of plot, mainly about the recognition of the heroine and her family and the love between the hero (probably, this is what I saw anyway). However, the plot of this book is still good, and I quite like it [blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

A little personal suggestion, when watching, there are some parts that use too many character descriptions, which will make you feel annoying if you watch too much. Some of them can actually be mentioned in one go, really! And what does this book say? There are still a lot of holes to fill, but everything else is good.

It's nice, but the ending is a bit hasty.

So pretty! But I rewatch it because I don't want to read the part about the heroine's disappearance.