I Somehow Got My Hands on a Real Evil Entity in an Infinite Game

It's pretty good. I hope the author doesn't do the harem thing. Either there's no cp, or there's two male protagonists. Also, the content of each chapter is sometimes not very clear. I hope the author can give it a try! More updates! ! ! [Blowing kiss]

The book is good. I think the world of the dungeon is well written. However, the real world has some problems. That is, you do not explain it clearly and it is very messy. And the background of the world where the protagonist lives is not particularly clear, because you are writing an imaginary and he has a unique setting. You have to explain it clearly, otherwise the readers will look confused. But the world of the dungeon, I think it is very nice. Come on, author, I hope your writing will get better and better in the future!

Although I think it's very interesting to watch so far, there are some places where the plot really changes without any foreshadowing, and the place suddenly changes. For example, there was a scene where one moment we were still in the cafeteria, and the next moment it was directly said that Zhang Jie had closed the door of the school doctor's office. At that time, I thought I had skipped a chapter, so I checked again and again. (It seems to be Chapters 8 and 9, I don't really remember) Although I knew from the later plot that Qiqi pretended to be Liu, but that part was really inexplicable, so I added a transitional plot. For example, after dinner, everyone returned to their place of residence, and then who and who went to the school doctor's office with whom. I have read Chapter 19, and I still don't know who the protagonist CP is, but I whisper, I feel that the protagonist interacts with the original subject very frequently, and it's not him, right... I hope not, otherwise there is a high probability that I will give up, and I personally can't accept it. After reading the first copy, I feel like I wanted to write a very large background, but I didn't write it well. At the end, I only talked about the town and the hospital, not the school. Personally, I feel that if I don't master it well, I can write it in three stories. Now that I have put them together, I feel that the result is completely unsustainable. At the end, it was said that it was to change the body of my sister, so what happened to the children who were hollowed out, and it was also inexplicably said to be transformed into mermaids, and what happened to so many people in the school who died, it was not explained clearly at all. If the girls died because their bodies were needed, why did the others die? Guinea pig for preliminary experiments? It is understandable why the couple who fell in love early in school, Lao Liu and others were killed. It was because the art teacher saw the scene. To put it nicely, it gives the author room to think, but to put it badly, it means that it is not explained clearly at all. So I feel like it can be divided into three dungeons, so that the explanation can be clearer and the plot of each character can be enriched. Now it really feels like this is just following the plot and completely ignoring the rest. Then returning to the current world is a bit inexplicable (personal feeling, please don't spray)

Super pretty! I just don't know who the other male protagonist is, so let's buy some shares of the two evil gods first, [Victory Laurel]

You guys say it's really amazing, trust me and it won't be a loss if you buy it. Let me tell you, if you like watching double-male protagonists, you must read this book. You really won't regret it! 😊

Thousands of words have finally come together, and it looks good, so please give it a thumbs up from the author. But who is Huo Li's CP?

It's so beautiful, isn't it? Why doesn't anyone watch it? The author is awesome (cannot be refuted. Jpg) Confession to the author (sympathy 🫰)

I have been reading this book for a long time, but it still doesn't make me bored. In the past, I would change a book in less than half an hour, but not this book. Originally, I wanted to wait for the author to finish writing before reviewing it to see if the author has failed. But the author gave me confidence and made me feel that this book is a good one. It will definitely become a hit. This is the only one I haven't gotten tired of reading. After all, there are too few high-quality Tomato novels now, and there are even fewer authors like you. I spend most of my time reading classics now, and there really are no other books to read (╥╯╰╥)ง So author, please work harder!

It's rare to make a review. Mainly because I really like the male protagonist, but the subsequent development of the story has the powerful evil god character giving his power to someone (no spoilers). Readers who don't like this kind of subject matter should choose carefully! This article seems to be about two men, but in fact it seems to force the male protagonist to have an attack, and the rhythm of the story is a bit confusing. I haven't finished reading it yet, but I've read most of it. I don't think I can find any reasons later to fill in the settings that some people don't like, so I still have to choose carefully. (Emphasis)

It's really beautiful. I really love this setting. It suits my taste perfectly. Absolutely nice! But I want to know who the other male protagonist is, I'm really looking forward to it!