All My Beast Companions Are Model Citizens

It's very interesting, not too cliche, and the protagonist's IQ is online. I hope there won't be a female protagonist. If there is, it won't be too cliché, and you can grow up by relying on the protagonist.

To be honest, this book actually has full potential. The plot is not cliché and the progress is quite fast. After all, it rushes directly to the final secret-the world battlefield. It does not just develop in the novice stage who doesn't understand anything. Of course, this is not a malicious attempt to lower the score. There is a reason why this star was deducted. When writing novels, it is more about relaxation and relaxation, that is, there are places where the rhythm is tight and there are places where the rhythm is relaxed. However, the author did not reflect this when writing. In most of the parts where the rhythm should be tense, he deliberately added funny psychological and linguistic descriptions, which caused the originally brewing tension to be diluted. The places that could be ignited suddenly felt like being poured with cold water. The rhythm suddenly slowed down. The combat part seemed lengthy and watery. I wanted to skip it but dare not skip it for fear of missing something. Of course, there is another reason, which is that funny psychological descriptions do not differentiate between characters (for example, the newly appeared city lord and the civil servant). In fact, the different personalities of different characters and beasts lead to different words, deeds, and psychological activities. Of course, experience will also determine the personality. Ye Chen and Wang Meng were both in the world battlefield, which makes it impossible for the two of them to have childish psychological activities. Therefore, they can only be interesting, but they cannot be written in a childish way. Only by grasping this limit can the characters be well portrayed. The book has just started. Pay attention to these issues in the future and you may have a chance to become popular.

There is a heroine! There is a heroine! Hope not! [Shock]

After reading these chapters, I looked solemn, lowered my head deeply, silently turned off my phone, stood up, opened the refrigerator, took out a bottle of 1982 collector's edition Nongfu Spring, held it tightly in my hand, and slowly walked to the window. The scenery outside the window was a bit dim, just like my mood, heavy, very heavy, gradually , it started to rain lightly in the gray sky outside. Why, my vision was blurred. I don't know whether it was because I was crying or because it was raining heavily. It might be both. My mood became more melancholy. I could no longer suppress my inner emotions. I opened the window and shouted out the window: Who are you looking at in the next few chapters? [Angry] [laughing evilly]

I finally grabbed the author's sofa once, it was great [smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile]

Come on, come on (I hope there will be no female protagonist)

I still don't understand, what is Bai Ying's predecessor? (／_＼)Big grudge

It's pretty good. I've read a few chapters. I wish there wasn't a female protagonist.

The author has no moral ethics and competes with the readers for first place [smile]

Ah, this, the ending really caught me off guard. Author, have you forgotten the school by Daming Lake? Did the leave you asked the teacher for as you wrote earlier be a little longer than 100 million? (*￣M￣) (Thinking) "Teacher: Oh, the world has begun the world battlefield in the white night! As for my students, didn't they only ask for a few days of leave! Σ(-`Д´-ﾉ;)ﾉ" Also, I always feel that the ending is a bit hasty. Alas, the author is really perfunctory, right? It must be so! (Crying)｡｡꒰ ´･~･꒱੭՞՞(helpless) But overall it's still good, (quietly tell you that it seems to be written in the back ฅ⁽͑ ˚̀ ˙̭ ˚́ ⁾̉ฅ) (sneaky) If you like reading short articles, you can jump in. Recommend ʕ •́؈•̀ ₎