The Tycoon System: I Can’t Spend All My Money

The writing style is childish, and I feel that the author has some cognitive issues regarding prices. Is the person who wrote the article a primary school student? For example, that buffet is so expensive per person, but the high-end seafood buffet is not that expensive, right? ! And the food is served so quickly (everyone knows it)? !

Lots of typos

The initial concept was okay, but by the time I got to the 70th chapter, I was so confused that I had no idea to read on.

It's too bad. The key is that it's not complete yet. It's still missing.

Very bad, short, incomplete story