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Heartthrob with brains

After reading a little bit, I got one star for the plot, two stars for the correct use of punctuation marks, and one star for the encouragement of seeing you on Tomato. The author's ideas are very good, and the writing is not awkward but has shortcomings. If you want to improve, you can refer to it. First, in terms of writing style, there are too many short sentences and insufficient descriptions. It is recommended to add various descriptions such as environmental descriptions. Second, in terms of plot coherence, due to the lack of description above, the plot develops too quickly and the article jumps around a lot. It is recommended to expand the content of each plot and describe it from multiple angles, instead of writing one sentence to eat and the next sentence to eat. Other plot-rich articles can be inserted in the middle. Add a separator or place display between plots and plots. Third, the character creation is not three-dimensional enough, and each character's image is thin. The author can refer to the book where the heroine is Wen Er or Mary Fang for specific improvements.

Super, super, super, super good-looking. Absolute child. It is simply good news for both men and women. The heroine has both high quotients. She will give up what she can't get. She will not repeatedly emphasize recalling the past like other heroines. They can be together if they don't hate it. She is also not like other heroines who are pretentious and pretentious about whether they can do this or that. The most important thing is that 90% of this book may be an NP novel. Hehe, such a beautiful book is expected to be a big hit🔥 and be seen by more book friends.

The male lead is outstanding, the female lead is Bai Yueguang, and Su Miaomiao is the happiest.

It's good-looking, but the ending is unprepared, but I feel that this is the best ending. There is a feeling of unfinished work. Although the book has ended, the story of Qin Yuan and others is still continuing.

I hate that I discovered this book so early and couldn't get enough of it [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying]

Yes, it's from another book, with a different feel. It was a love-at-first-sight type with peak appearance and unexplainable buff. The heroine in this book is a story of love at first sight and lasting love from the inside out. Haha, the heroine is really good, smart, resourceful, kind and principled! Bai Yueguang has helped many people, so she is also a lot of people. She is humble and respectful to others. In short, the heroine deserves it! ! ! !

I wonder which man the heroine will end up with in the end? They are all excellent and have their own merits. It would be best if we could all have them all [laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing]

It's very interesting. I like this kind of scheming and resourceful heroine (a complimentary word). The key is that DaDa is updating every day. I will keep following DaDa as it updates. I wish DaDa good health and good luck.

It's really great. Good luck to the author.